Reviews for Traitor
H.TITAN chapter 24 . 8/5/2014
A great story that was! In middle of it I was really frustrated by Legolas' actions and reasons. They were like a fool's decisions but the ending was the golden part of your story because I don't think he could fix his mistakes easily if not for his sacrifise, and I like the fact that you used the guilt/blame factor very wisly, on other fictions they usually blame themselves for things that even a kid can distinguish is noy their fault!

In short, it was amazing!
Guest chapter 16 . 3/29/2014
Pathetic!
Erestor Silvertongue chapter 24 . 10/2/2013
Another ending. We readers NEED an alternate ending. Beautifully written, captivating, engaging, but WAY. TOO. SAD. Poor Legolas. Poor Thranduil. *Sob sob.*
Agareth chapter 24 . 8/10/2013
I'm crying my eyes off right now. It's so sad! But still this is one of my most favorite fanfics I've ever read. ;) It's an honor and you should be very happy for it. :3

Seriously, this is brilliant! I've read this like ten times and every time I cry. Mostly because it's so sad but also 'cos it's so great. It's too glorious. :D

I think you should do alternative ending to this because I don't want Leggie to die. :( He's too good for something like that. You should kill Frodo or Sam, they are needless anyway...
Idekwhy chapter 24 . 8/2/2013
Such a sad story...Poor Thranduil...
But It was well-written nonetheless!
Great job xx
I.Am.Cheese.And.Cheese.Is.Me chapter 24 . 6/9/2013
I want to hate you but that was really good. Excuse me while I sob in a corner
MagicMoonyx chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
I'm crying right now. This part, the last, did really touch me :'(

"He died... to save Middle Earth."
And it was true. For nobody ever forgot just how close Middle Earth had come to falling to Sauron. For if Gondor had fallen, none of the other free kingdoms would have had the strength to withstand the growing power of Mordor. And it was only the actions of Legolas, when all hope seemed lost, that saved Middle Earth from total ruin.

Oh, please, make the alternative ending! I beg you to!
But, I fell in love with this story. You are an brilliant writer 3
KKtheNeko chapter 24 . 1/7/2013
This is such an awesome ending... really really sad but AWESOME!
May Arisa chapter 24 . 12/29/2012
That was so sad and beautiful I got tears in my eyes! Last chapter you said something about an alternative endig, wuld you please write that too? It just seems so... I don't know, desperate?

On another note, I have a request for a story, if you want and have time. Legolas switches, for some reason or other, to Sauron's side, for real. In return Greenwood gets protection from Sauron, and Thranduil knows about it. How would that work out, and what will the rest of the Fellowship think?
Guest chapter 24 . 9/29/2012
NOOOOOO *falls to the ground sobbing* Legolas actually died, Legolas actually died, no :( How could you be so cruel? This story was amazing, but why did Legolas have to die? :'( I am literally bawling pathetically now
The Frost Raven of Lord Pride chapter 24 . 9/3/2012
...sob...
Rachielle chapter 20 . 8/22/2012
No. Not Aragorn!
Phoenixica24 chapter 24 . 8/11/2012
Anything but death.
Phoenixica24 chapter 23 . 8/11/2012
...no. Legolas is NOT dead. I refuse to believe this.
Phoenixica24 chapter 22 . 8/11/2012
Butbutbutbutbut...no. no. no. no. no. Legolas just NOT just die!
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