|Reviews for Easter Chocolate|
| Sinceslicedbread chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Sublime and very clever.
I loved the way you transposed E&J's love story from a mountain top to open parkland. Keeping them in touch with the great outdoors, was a stroke of genius.
"There was never enough time" adding dialogue enhanced my "viewing" pleasure.
The sudden darkness was a shock. E's dad killing his mum - oh my!
Your storytelling was so engaging that, I was surprised by the eventual intimate scene. I'd forgotten one had to happen.
It was all very French.
It was all too perfect for words (sigh).
| Nevrandil chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Oh god, this was perfect. So much angst...gaaaah :D thank you!
| otomemiyakatsumi331 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Firstly and most importantly, this story was amazing. The Paris setting was perfect, especially for a scenario where Jack and Ennis end up together (thank God for at least some societies being accepting). Secondly, on a more minor note, you should probably up the rating on this since, as I noticed, there were some adult situations. And thirdly, I really liked Sophie Calle. She didn't take any shy, wimpy nonsense from Ennis. Great job! Bon travail!
| nannily chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I have been in Paris only once but I loved it! So I HAD TO love your story, too. :)