Reviews for snapping her soul in half
with-a-passion chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
so sad and beautiful. lovely
Allie Lynn chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Plz update with more chapters that was really good
Serpentine Wisdom chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I like how you focused more on the fact that she's dead than the bloodlust new vampires feel. Too many fics ignore it in favour of blood cravings when it's such a big deal - especially for someone like Elena who never wanted to be a vampire.
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really enjoyed this!
queenofmysticfalls chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
can this

not be a oneshot


it's perfect

I'm crying and lkdsfgj


more pls? :(
complexities chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I really loved this, but right at the very bottom of the page there were suddenly a few errors with punctuation and capitalization D:
Matt-On-Matt chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
elejah makes everything better
HasFar2Go chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This was gorgeously written, and the repetition worked perfectly. While the show will sadly never go in this direction, you successfully created a scene that I think is true to their characters and would have been lovely to see. I hope you continue to write fics for this fandom and this pair, as they need more writers like you!
lilylulurose chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Honestly. I just want her to be with Elijah period. God they do parallel one another so much. I loved that he wanted for her life to be human and happy. He cherishes her humanity. That being said, I think he loves her completely. Therefore,I believe in the end it wouldn't make a difference to him loving her. He would want to help her keep her compassion. Plec is so obsessed with the "triangle" that unfortunately they will not happen on screen. It's such a missed opportunity. I loved this one shot. Thanks for writing it :)
she's just dreaming chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
one word to describe this;

bittersweet, in a good way.
Sarah August chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Very lovely and tragic. Well done!
The Dark I Know Well chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I wouldn't have mind if things would have happened this way. I actually like how it is not all about the craving for blood, but about her being dead, the fact that she died. I love how you let her keep repeating that, as if she hasn't quite realised it yet, as if she doesn't quite believe it. And I'm really glad that Elijah and Elena found each other, there will always be a part of me that ships the two of them.

Yes, I am also thoroughly pissed at the fact that Elena is turned. I understand that they need new dynamics on the show and that it was bound to happen, but still. She is supposed to be human, to actually live her life. Besides that, I'm a Stelena shipper (with a little Elejah on the side) and I just don't think that vamp!Elena with Stefan is going to happen, I don't think it'll work.
pariswindspeed chapter 1 . 5/13/2012


She has a hand on her chest, and each time her heart does not beat when it should, she lets out a high-pitched, heartbroken keening sound. She's dead. She's dead.


Like she'd never wanted to be. She'd wanted to live. She'd wanted to breathe.


Of course Elena would be worried for Elijah - even in her vampire state she's going to worry and care too much and it's probably not even the right time and she shouldn't be upset thtat Klaus is dead, but she is, okay world? She is because Elijah's upset about it and she can't handle him upset asdfghjkl

I cannot with you. You are consistently doing things to me. TOO MANY FEELINGS

I don't know if I'm bitter about her turning into a vampire. Because honestly, it was inevitable and it can turn out great. But, I just wanted her to be human and I wanted her to die with Stefan by her side and maybe Elijah and Damon and Matt there too. Caroline would plan something special and she'd tell her she's the best firned she's ever had and Jeremy would cry because she's his sister, okay?

That's what I wanted. Her to live and breathe and I don't want her to be too different now. I don't know. I'm conflicted. I think it can be a great twist, also though. Anyway.

You are perfect Elena is perfect and so is Elijah ugh

Deleted100200300 chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This was awesome and really, really beautiful to read.