|Reviews for Death Is Only The Beginning|
| Nerdy Anime Girl chapter 51 . 2/9/2017
Hey man I guess it's been a while since you've updated huh? Kinda sad such an amazing story probably won't get a ending.
Well I'm sure you've got your own things going on in life so I won't trouble you for too long.
You have a fantastic story so if you ever do find inspiration or come back here please add more or complete it.
Best of luck to you my stranger friend!
From Nerdy Anime Girl
| Ms Marshmallow-chan chapter 51 . 2/4/2017
| Ms Marshmallow-chan chapter 30 . 2/4/2017
this scene was sooo emotional...
| Rell chapter 51 . 1/20/2017
This ain't an actual review, but come on, you can't just leave the story on a cliffhanger like that and not finish nor update it in months!
| EvanSol0919 chapter 51 . 1/6/2017
This is an excellent story! Just two questions - would Yuzu and Karin only be Ichigo's half sisters? And why didn't the other Vizards come along?
| NaruKushi chapter 51 . 12/21/2016
Excellent fic. I hope you will continue it! I hope you are able to overcome whatever is delaying you, be it life or school. I can't remember if you mentioned if you're still in college or not in the author's notes, but my friends always tell me: A's before baes GAHAHA.
| zubhanwc3 chapter 14 . 11/8/2016
ahhhh T_T, i have a feeling that you posted this chapter shortly before ichigo met squad 0, or specifically the guy who made zanpakuto's
it irks me, but i can handle it because
your story in general is pretty damn awesome,
... but 10th division isshin-taichou and quincy powers in afterlife and related things, nooo T_T
i hope you delayed your story long enough so that we can meet isshin xD
| zubhanwc3 chapter 13 . 11/8/2016
I will honestly say, i expected ichigo to do better against the hollows, the reason being that ichigo not only has huge reiryoku reserves, but he is the type of person to advance EXPONENTIALLY when under pressure, and if he is already the best without pressure, i almost thought he would achive shikai right than and there, and the asuachi would become zangetsu xD
| zubhanwc3 chapter 9 . 11/8/2016
nice chapter, and i like how ichigo had to take some time to produce the kido, but i half expected it to explode on his face xD
| zubhanwc3 chapter 8 . 11/8/2016
i know this is way too late, but personally i would prefer ichigo to be in squad 8. I have a few reasons for this,
1- while both 13th and 8th division captains are nito ryu, 13th is required to release shikai, which would be annoying is ichigo wanted to train his nito ryu, unless u arent making him dual wield xD
2- Personally, I don't want rukia and ichigo to be in the same division, ichigo would overshadow rukia, and she wouldn't get the credit she deserves, the closeness that kaien had with rukia wouldn't exist causing rukia to lose a lot of chances for character development, so on and so forth
3- Shunsui seems to have the type of personality that ichigo would be able to get along with, while not 100% similar, its enough for there to be a bit of companionship and respect between them
4-while karakura town is under the 13th's jurisdiction, ichigo wouldn't know anyone from there so that wouldn't really matter as much for ichigo, by putting him in the eighth division, you can make their jurisdiction whatever you want, and ichigo will probably also have more free time with shunsui being his superior xD
| kiyan chapter 18 . 11/3/2016
Well that was unexpected
| suedarau chapter 50 . 11/1/2016
Hi. I really enjoyed your story. I have question about new chapter. I know you are very busy person. If you have any chance, I would like to ask you to continue to write new chapter?
| Panda-Angel-Wings chapter 51 . 10/31/2016
Now that I finally caught up, I have to say, I love this story.
I wonder how things will play out since so much is different from the canon Bleach universe. Maybe Renji felt too jealous and thought they were spending too much time without him, or he couldn't bear to be near them when they were together, even though they kept their PDA levels to a bare minimum.
I wonder if Orihime and Uryuu are going to start liking each other, or will work together like in canon. I like the addition of Shinji, I wasn't expecting that, at all. I really wonder how they will save Ichigo.
Please update soon, it's been so so long.
| Raven Fay chapter 51 . 10/25/2016
I don't know if you've lost interst in this story if it just takes a while to write but I really like this fic, please update.
| katamari157 chapter 29 . 10/24/2016
Are hollow's honorable opponents? No. They cheat, trick, lie, and steal. So what pride could be gained from facing one alone? Also one that has faced down an entire squad. Shouldn't the shinigami exterminate the beast in the most efficient way possible? Like...in a team? To minimize casualties? Especially if proven dangerous. If this chapter holds true Uchitake sets an incredibly risky precedent. It destroys the point of hierarchy and structure. That the loved ones of fallen shinigami are allowed to face the killers one on one AKA marriage Gotei13.
And you're telling me in an army of 1000's of warriors there isn't a fast response team for such situations. Uh huh.
It's also infuriating that Uchitake comes along but then refuses to help until it is too late. W.t.f. just knock your man out and deal with the issue if he isn't thinking clearly. It's pointless to lose both of your best people just for a momentary feeling.
I understand a need for a catalyst for Ichigo and Rukia to grow closer but please let the hollow's outsmart the shinigami, not let the shinigami destroy themselves.