|Reviews for Stolen Moments|
| KriaDensifan chapter 11 . 2/23
this story is so amazing i love rereading it time to time!
are you considering maybe continue it? i would love to read what you planned for the next chapters
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/12
Are you going to finish this soon?
| filliondensi chapter 11 . 1/1
This story is honestly one of the best Densi stories I have ever read. Absolutely incredibly well written. From the playful banter, to the sexual tension to the heated serious discussions...you wrote Densi absolutely beautifully. I started this story around 830 tonight and have been literally reading it pretty much non stop...its 1am now. Such a wonderful job and I look forward to reading anything else you write in the future for them. Thanks for the good read. Now if only your story had been how the episode had gone...lol.
| Stealthy Tiger chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
| GirlontheBus chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Wow! This is the best NCIS: LA fanfic I've come across so far! The characters are EXACTLY the same as they are on the show. I LOVE IT! SO EXCITED TO READ ALL THIS! I'll probably finish it all in one sitting :)
thanks for the awesome writing :)
| hrselovr101 chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
So many goose bumps and butterflies. I absolutely loved these two chapters! I stumbled upon this fiction on Tumblr, and I'm so glad I could find it! Can't wait for more. :) And you write both characters so accurately and truthfully; Densi is perfect!
| Grainofsandfr chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
Great story ! I hope you will write more for this story one day ;)
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/12/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE ADD MORE. THIS. IS. AMAZING :) :) :)
| Avid Reader chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
Um, okay, I didn't think you could top the laundry room scene, but this one came awfully close. Everything about it, after the dream of course (which was very hopeful for Densi shippers) was incredible. The playfulness of his way of waking her up, her pose while sitting on the edge of the pool and his reaction to her (his goddess), the kiss ... my word the KISS! I don't know how they stopped, really I don't. Maybe not doing it in the pool, because yeah, not nearly as enjoyable as people think when they read those scenes, but him carrying her up to the bed and ravishing her? Yeah.
The only thing I almost expected was for him to give them an out by doing something goofy, like leaning into her and then faking an overbalanced slip and falling face first into the pool, giving them a chance to laugh it off while "breaking the mood" for them. But once it crossed a certain point, as you showed their cover was not an issue anymore, and he had to do something else to get them out of the situation. Amazing self-control on his part - I know I wouldn't be able to resist an incredibly turned-on Kensi (or any Kensi for that matter so long as she's not in "I'll kill you" mode. *shakes head* Nah, even then she's sexy as hell).
I hope that they're able to resolve this, and also that he can find a way to remind her that, yet again, she slipped and used his real name. Maybe that would provoke a fight (could be good for some drama), or he could use her cover name more often just to show her how important it is?
Okay, off to get a cold drink, then to the next chapter. You really are an amazing writer!
| Avid Reader chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
*reaches for the defibrillator* Damn, girl, that pretty much stopped my heart it was so sexy. The image of her in his shirt doing that? Wow. Good thing I was drinking cold water at the time or I might have spontaneously combusted. I don't know how he resisted that. I would have just thrown her over my shoulder, carried her to bed and done very wicked things to her, partner or not. Guess Deeks has a will of titanium or something, because I'm pretty sure she would have melted iron with that seduction.
*fans self* Okay, off to a very cold shower I think.
| Brookels82 chapter 11 . 10/25/2013
Wow! This has been one of my most favourite fanfiction EVER! I love how you have written the characters, how you seem to tantalize the reader with AHHHMAZING dialog that literally make it unable to put down. Please write more soon - I'm hanging to see how they continue!
| JELLYZ chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
WELL DESERVED 600th REVIEW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
| sinistermoxicity chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
Just finished chapter five... Wow, I'm hooked. You have such a gift with painting a picture for your audience. Can't wait to finish the story tomorrow.
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/6/2013
PERFECTION. Please write more
| Saphire Raider chapter 11 . 10/2/2013
wow this story was amazing i read it til like 2am and finished it up this afternoon. please update soon wow amazing job! :)