Reviews for The Pretense of Dominance and Control
Team Major Whitlock chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I loved it x
Nocturnal Emissions chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
that was awesome. I really felt for Jasper when he let Peter go. Awesome fic!
NotActive123456 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Thank you for your entry into The Summer it All Began contest. Due to the anonymity of the contest, we are sending standard reviews to let you know we've been reading all of your wonderful stories. We will be reviewing each story with a personal review once they are posted on your personal account, so we can keep things fair and fun until the winner is announced. We appreciate your entry and good luck!
TwistedforTwilight chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Being a judge in the competition I’ll have to wait to give you a real review until after you post to your own profile – that’s if you wish to do so.

But I thank you for your contribution to the contest and giving us all a little more slash to read and enjoy. Good luck in the contest!
SimplyMatt chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Good story, well done
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I liked this o/s. At least they found happiness, even though it wasn't with each other. Good luck in the contest.
Debbi84 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I liked it!