|Reviews for The Redemption|
| TropicalMan65 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Shoulda added the dragon ramming its massive cock down the knight's throat, choking on his cum, blood, and tears.
| lifetroll chapter 5 . 10/5/2012
hey simon we wont tell anyone your name good story really enjoyed it \
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
| shadowb4dawn chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Love it! As an avid Runescape player, It's fantastic to read such a great story about my favorite game!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
Glad to see the chapters coming along cant wait for november and the next chapter its really getting exciting!
| 2lazy2login chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
Not bad. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but it's a good story. I'm not sure if I'm missing something, but where did the werewolves come from? No cookie for me, I guess ):
It was a little fast paced and a little messy, but, like I said, it has a lot of story potential. The only thing is, I haven't heard much about the dragon except in chapter 1. Is the dragon a major plot point, or just something to kick the story off?
So, in the future, try to explain some of the plot points a little better and go a little bit slower. Otherwise, great job!