|Reviews for Trip of a Lifetime|
| sherryola chapter 57 . 3/7
oh oh oh! How I loved this. I can never choose a favorite of your stories, but they are by far some of the best I read. I loved this, a sugary sweet guy and strong woman, a loving family and just enough drama without overdoing it or drawing it out too long. I loved the love in this so much. Thanks for this story and I hope you keep writing. Your stories make me very happy.
| sherryola chapter 29 . 3/6
Well, anyone would feel the way Bella did walking in and seeing her man in bed with someone else. whew! I wouldn't get upset over the publishing house deal, and i'm glad Bella didn't do that. I remember being totally baffled in fridays at noon when Bella had a fit because Edward found a job for her. That's how the job market works after all. I should feel bad that Heidi is dead but can't find it in me to care. grin. though I wish Bella hadn't punched her. weird huh?
| sherryola chapter 19 . 3/6
Oh, I'm glad Rose wasn't the mole! and i hope Emmett wins her over.
| sherryola chapter 17 . 3/6
The Sanchez thing was pretty funny. I'm glad they resolved that so quickly. Jealousy on either side isn't hot in my opinion. It shows a lack of trust. But the way he handled Sanchez made me laugh anyway.
| sherryola chapter 15 . 3/6
Isn't bella a little ridiculously jealous? i'm sort of shakin my head over some of her reactions. lol. And hmmm, is Rosalie the mole?
| sherryola chapter 3 . 3/6
There are so many cocky not so sweet edwards in fics, I'm looking forward to this one! Alice is sneaky but so helpful. Oh, meant to say, I love charlie as a vet. great change there.
| sherryola chapter 2 . 3/6
I love this story. First of all, It's a hoot and so fun that Edward was the one to trip! And all the connections between them, her dad, alice, Jasper, love it. The dialect works great without being overdone and irritating. I feel like I'm vistin my mama when I read the dialog. Not thrilled with the introduction of Jacob, but you know, I guess it has to happen! Anyway, this is a blast to read and i'm looking forward to seeing what else comes along.
| LouiseJLSLFC chapter 2 . 2/24
I got to:
"why there was no woman at his
stove fixing dinner".
this is the reason I stopped reading. I'm at university at the moment and everything is about gender roles, hell even my dissertation is so I detest this. This is not your fault though, I'm just reading too much about gender.
| MsLiss chapter 40 . 2/7
Edward is very sexist
Bella pandas to him in that regard
I struggle with this a bit
| CSG chapter 1 . 1/27
Ran up on this & im adding it to my tbr. I hope to read it soon.
| MsLiss chapter 1 . 1/27
I found a rec for this on fb and I love the 1st chapter!
370k words is a bit daunting though! lol
| NHSheridan chapter 57 . 1/6
Trespass came up on my email alerts in Dec. I read it remembered how much I enjoyed your writing. So since then I have been rereading stories I've already read and reading stories I missed. I'm so happy I followed that alert. I absolutely loved this story (all of them mixed in) and am sad it was over.
Thank you for sharing ... I'm on to your next story :)
| mrsm0803 chapter 57 . 12/2/2013
What a lovely story. I've enjoyed every chapter. You created wonderful characters and so many levels of plot and intrigue. Well done.
| mrsm0803 chapter 39 . 11/30/2013
| mrsm0803 chapter 35 . 11/30/2013
Aw, how perfect!