Reviews for Bloody Valentine
Ahrianrod chapter 1 . 3/10
This story is AWESOME! It's written pretty well and the story is catching. I also liked Aki's character. I hope you will continue it sometime because it's one of the best stories I read in a while
Picturesque chapter 27 . 2/4
Hello. Just here to comment on how AWESOME YOU ARE
IM VERY LUCKY TO HAVE READ THIS
Marinefoooorrd
I want the Marineford paaart
Its for her debut to the world and terrorize them to insanity
But I know thats like a million miles away from me cause you havent been updating but izz okay man
I still love this I hope you update someday
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
how the fuck is a baby late by ELEVEN MONTHS?!
RedAllen chapter 26 . 9/2/2017
So is it Jim Hawkings like from Treasure Planet?
Guest chapter 27 . 4/26/2017
KEEP WRITING PLZ
Shadowed Voices chapter 10 . 4/25/2017
It occurs to me that I do not know nearly enough about One Piece to be reading this fic. It's good, though, and you were recommended to me as an author so I'm going to go poke at some of your other fics now.
Faery66 chapter 27 . 4/19/2017
Hope to read more soon...

D
Stone Elbow chapter 27 . 3/24/2017
This is probably the best Harry Potter/One Piece crossover fic there is. It captures the rambunctious, joyful insanity that is One Piece. Chock full of awesome badassery (I'm a fan of badassery). Creative in a way that makes it stand out among fanfics (I love completely AU plotlines). Writing style is excellent, even with the occasional English mistake.

Still, I can see why you want to rewrite it... it would make for a smoother read if the chapters were in chronological order, and some of the material is repeated from multiple characters' perspectives, which can get boring.

Wish you hadn't stopped writing before revealing Aki and Ace's big promise.
Guest chapter 27 . 3/8/2017
Amazing story. I hope u update soon.
Fencer22 chapter 16 . 12/19/2016
I really do like this but all the time skips and the meandering thoughts are driving me up the wall. Thanks for the story but I think I've had enough of it. Still those things asside the writingbis very good.
makesomehassel chapter 27 . 10/25/2016
ohhhhhh I really wish to see what will happen or if Aki will fight Teach !
Furthermore, did I tell you How much of a wonderful writer you're to me XD .. I like Aki and Ace relationship the best and I wish If at least the 2 of them would have a chance together cuz I really wish for Ace to be happy and I think that Aki gave up rather fast on getting with him telling herself that she's not good enough really make me sad ! T_T
"she_ no, they deserve each other!"
and about a lemon ... I'm not sure If I liked the idea or not.
but I'm really sad cuz you stopped when things start it getting interesting so I'm going to ask you if you've your mind in continuing this marvellous work or not and if yes ... pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllls update pls pls pls pls pls pls T_T
Tsume Yuki chapter 14 . 10/7/2016
My god, I just want to smush Ace and Aki together so bad. This is fabulous fiction and I'm thoroughly enjoying it,

Tsume
xxx
Squarekiddo chapter 6 . 8/9/2016
You really need to work on dialogue, its getting really boring just read paragraph after paragraph without any dialogue.
Squarekiddo chapter 4 . 8/9/2016
I thought Shanks hat his sword on his right cause hes starting move is a reverse grip. I can have sworn Ive seen that somewhere in the manga.

Oh and btw, the movies arent canon.
Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
I wish there was more dialogue and less fleshing out. Of course its only chapter 2, and I might just be giddy to some degree.
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