|Reviews for Bloody Valentine|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4
how the fuck is a baby late by ELEVEN MONTHS?!
| RedAllen chapter 26 . 9/2
So is it Jim Hawkings like from Treasure Planet?
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/26
KEEP WRITING PLZ
| Shadowed Voices chapter 10 . 4/25
It occurs to me that I do not know nearly enough about One Piece to be reading this fic. It's good, though, and you were recommended to me as an author so I'm going to go poke at some of your other fics now.
| Faery66 chapter 27 . 4/19
Hope to read more soon...
| Stone Elbow chapter 27 . 3/24
This is probably the best Harry Potter/One Piece crossover fic there is. It captures the rambunctious, joyful insanity that is One Piece. Chock full of awesome badassery (I'm a fan of badassery). Creative in a way that makes it stand out among fanfics (I love completely AU plotlines). Writing style is excellent, even with the occasional English mistake.
Still, I can see why you want to rewrite it... it would make for a smoother read if the chapters were in chronological order, and some of the material is repeated from multiple characters' perspectives, which can get boring.
Wish you hadn't stopped writing before revealing Aki and Ace's big promise.
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/8
Amazing story. I hope u update soon.
| Fencer22 chapter 16 . 12/19/2016
I really do like this but all the time skips and the meandering thoughts are driving me up the wall. Thanks for the story but I think I've had enough of it. Still those things asside the writingbis very good.
| makesomehassel chapter 27 . 10/25/2016
ohhhhhh I really wish to see what will happen or if Aki will fight Teach !
Furthermore, did I tell you How much of a wonderful writer you're to me XD .. I like Aki and Ace relationship the best and I wish If at least the 2 of them would have a chance together cuz I really wish for Ace to be happy and I think that Aki gave up rather fast on getting with him telling herself that she's not good enough really make me sad ! T_T
"she_ no, they deserve each other!"
and about a lemon ... I'm not sure If I liked the idea or not.
but I'm really sad cuz you stopped when things start it getting interesting so I'm going to ask you if you've your mind in continuing this marvellous work or not and if yes ... pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllls update pls pls pls pls pls pls T_T
| Tsume Yuki chapter 14 . 10/7/2016
My god, I just want to smush Ace and Aki together so bad. This is fabulous fiction and I'm thoroughly enjoying it,
| Squarekiddo chapter 6 . 8/9/2016
You really need to work on dialogue, its getting really boring just read paragraph after paragraph without any dialogue.
| Squarekiddo chapter 4 . 8/9/2016
I thought Shanks hat his sword on his right cause hes starting move is a reverse grip. I can have sworn Ive seen that somewhere in the manga.
Oh and btw, the movies arent canon.
| Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
I wish there was more dialogue and less fleshing out. Of course its only chapter 2, and I might just be giddy to some degree.
| Tomtakahic chapter 27 . 5/6/2016
Yo this is one of my favorite fanfics I'm wondering are you stil gonna rewrite it or have you changed your mind? Looking forwards to rewrite/next chapter
| blackbloodywolf chapter 27 . 2/29/2016