Reviews for The Things I Left Unsaid
odd-gelato chapter 6 . 11/24/2015
It's been a couple years since you updated this, but I just wanted to say this is great and I hope you find your way back to it someday.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/11/2015
i came fo teh midnight ship 3
NingyoKuro chapter 6 . 2/25/2015
*gasps as it ends here*
But... Dib...
... (I really need to start doing better things than keep reading ZaDr fanfiction... but your stories are so good! xD)
Glowzilla chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
Please keep going! I wanna know what happens! I'm dying over here )
ngrey651 chapter 6 . 9/15/2013
This story's depressing, neither Zim nor Dib have anything left...especially not Dib, his entire species is pretty much annihilated. The most likable and sympathetic protagonist in the show and you killed off the planet and have pretty much driven his species to extinction. Even though this clearly goes against what happened IN the show, as evidenced by the fact there are still humans ON Earth in the future? Remember the Christmas episode with the Frosty robot thing?
ColdHeartedVixen chapter 5 . 9/9/2013
It's been a lot longer than a week. Is this fic dead? It's really good so if it isn't dead, an update would be appreciated.
RandomZadr chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
I really like the effort and detail put into this fanfiction. Its really a very fascinating story that I would love to see completed. Very unfortunate to see it hasn't updated in so long but oh well. I'll be watching in the hopes you will update again. Thanks for the awesome read. 3
darkloveforfanfiction chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
Awesome, I love how you wrote Zim and Dib!
SlavetoMyself55 chapter 5 . 6/18/2012
Love it! Please continue with this story and I will go forth being a happy cabbage. :) Well in character too! Can't wait for the next chapter!
InvaderRioux chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
OMG. The way you handled their interaction was awesome. I loved the comment about Dib's toilet and could totally see that happening if this were an episode.

I love this, and I hope you continue it soon.
InvaderRioux chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
"As with all good things that happened to Dib Membrane, however, this sense of normalcy wasn't to last." I love that.

Dang it, why do I always choose the good stories to catch up on in one sitting? T.T
InvaderRioux chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
Okay. Wow.

GoldenSnowflake, this is shaping up to be a pretty cool story.

Though it feels pretty in-character, you tell the story like a novel. I feel like each chapter tells me more than most of such short length. This feels like the natural progression of Dib's character. And I love how you described the Earth's destruction. Just wow.

Thank you for writing this fanfic!
InvaderRioux chapter 2 . 6/15/2012

Oh my gosh.

I read the last part like six times over. XD

You handled it really well - I didn't feel like I was reading a cheesy porno. It seemed like a young kid's natural insecurity and curiosity.

Nice work!
InvaderRioux chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This is honestly one of the most interesting opening chapters I've ever seen in an IZ fic. The robot teacher was actually the kind of character Jhonen would create. I like it!
cupidity11 chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
Well, I shall tell you that I normally wait to give a full review until the end of a multi-chaptered story.

So, this won't be a gigantic thing but, mainly it will be me listing things I like about your lovely Fic thus far.

-How you began the story with the robot teacher and how it gave us just a small taste of what sort of feel this story would have and what was to come.

-Goodness. I can picture older Dib perfectly and he's just...gorgeous.

-When it got to the masturbating I was legitmatly freaking out. I hid behind my hands and took deep breaths. I's so weird because Dib is probably my favorite fictional character EVER. I want to hold him and snuggle him like my baby. But, I also want to make sweet, sweet love to him.

-And the way you described the eh-hem scene wasn't too descriptive and not too vague. AND HOW HE BEGAN TO PICTURE CERTAIN THINGS RELATED TO ZIM WAS PERFECT.

-I began bouncing up and down when Zim was introduced. And he's sick. D: Oh noes. I hope it's nothing too serious.

-And when he was checking for life in the irken...*swoon*

Gosh, you just are keeping them wonderfully IC. Which is VERY,VERY hard to do in ZaDr. Can I also say that I am thrilled you are a ZaDr writer. A GOOD one. WE don't have many of those and it's given us a rather bad name, wouldn't you say?

Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter! :D
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