Reviews for Guilt by Association
Guest chapter 8 . 3/14/2013
I thought you could have put another chapter in here my friend..
monamourbelair chapter 8 . 7/4/2012
YAY! Wow, they finally got together! Great story and great ending too! Can't wait until your next story!
Mahala chapter 8 . 6/12/2012
Sorry about not reviewing before but I only just got around to reading this. I see you like to make girls the baddies too. So do I. I am sure women can be far more cruel than men. LOL! Anyway I enjoyed the story. Great action scenes. Just two little suggestions if you don't mind. One is that it would be nice if you could add details about your OCs. We can all picture the main characters but not the OCs. It really helps to create a picture in the reader's mind if we know a little about them - hair, eyes, facial details, demeanour etc - especially when there are multiple characters being introduced. Two is just a little grammar thing. You tend to use 'your' instead of 'you're' and 'their' instead of 'they're'. It's only a minor thing but it's a shame to detract from your otherwise good story. Hope you write more.
loopydreamer chapter 8 . 5/24/2012
i've just read your last two chapters. I loved your story. It was great! Can't wait for the next one :)
Swarovski chapter 8 . 5/21/2012
Aww, good ending. Mac gets the girl, Adam is okay, and the baddies get their comeuppance. Cool - now write some more stories for us readers. ;)
Swarovski chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
Thank goodness, they didn't harm Lucy, phew. Now we just need to save Mac before the end of the story - I'm guessing you'll make sure he's all right, right? :D
Swarovski chapter 5 . 5/21/2012
Oh boy, I honestly don't know who to feel more sorry for now, Adam or Mac. :C I hope Mac is found VERY soon ... :D
Swarovski chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
Hey, that's sexual harrassment! It doesn't get any nastier - poor Mac, you've got to find a way out of this place. :C
Swarovski chapter 3 . 5/21/2012
Yikes, they sure are nasty girls, groping Mac against his will, tsk, tsk! I hope Jo will be okay - is someone coming to her rescue? Can't stay, I've got to move on and hopefully find out in the next chapter. ;D
Swarovski chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
I don't know how I missed the fact that you've written another story. And, ooh, Mac's in trouble again - my favorite. Those are some nasty girls you've got there - are you really going to let them shoot Jo I'm moving right along to the next chapter - thank goodness! :D
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 8 . 5/20/2012
Wow, this has been a fantastic story. I like that it was quick paced and could have easily made for a very good and very entertaining episode.

I can't wait to see what other sotries you come up with. You should make them longer becuase your writing certainly keeps your reader wanting more.

Again, very good work.

:)
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
Brilliant! Off to read more. I will be sad to see this story end. :)
Sam Waterston Fan chapter 8 . 5/20/2012
Glad Mac was okay.

I do have to admit, I always thought Jo liked Mac, A LOT. But I think it's more like respect with love.
littlesweetcupcake chapter 8 . 5/20/2012
I don't want that to be the end. Love it!
littlesweetcupcake chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
There has to be more than one chapter left! We haven't even gotten a really good JAC chapter! :(
35 | Page 1 .. Last Next »