|Reviews for Drown|
| StardustOwl chapter 36 . 18h ago
Was that the end? Please write more, I want to see them defeating Polt! I'm glad that Thor is nice and OMG I HATE Odin for what he did to Loki, both when he was a child and an adult, he was awful in the chapter where he forgot loki's eighth/seventieth birthday! This story was fantastic and I love the way you've written everything!
| articwolfgirl347 chapter 36 . 3/13
Psst. You. Yeah, you.
| batfan7 chapter 36 . 3/11
Fantastic story! I love it! And I hope you are planning to write more. Please?
Your characterization of everyone feels quite real and the plot is interesting. I'm currently wondering what ended up happening with Clint and Tasha. And Fury. And whether Loki's magic is permanently damaged or not (I'm hoping not, since he seems to be inclined to use it for good now). Are you planning to follow up on Loki's kids later? Will Thor ever figure out what happened to Loki and will the brothers truly reconcile? These are all questions I hope you'll answer sometime soon.
I look forward to the next chapter!
| Fan of yours chapter 36 . 3/1
Please please feed my addiction and update! I love this story like none other.
| Guest chapter 36 . 3/1
Meep! Much need for update!Much anticipation! Please please please please please please update soon! I love this so much! I love the character relationships and I love how you still stay true to their characters yet still manage to create those relationships. Please please please please please please please update this!
| Liv chapter 36 . 2/28
I am now hopelessly addicted to this fic. Pleeease update as soon as you get the chance!
| DarkenedRose24 chapter 36 . 2/28
-blinks- more please? -puppy dog eyes-
| Tumblrgirl chapter 6 . 2/27
What Loki tells Steve here, perhaps that is not the whole truth? If in some way Loki was being controlled, who would believe him? He has already been labelled a liesmith, and his brother looks down upon him as weak and cowardly. I was cruising through tumblr (I spend too much time there) when I came across the article above, which lends proof that Loki was being controlled (and possibly didn't even know it). Or maybe I am reading too deeply into things.
| sari2728 chapter 6 . 2/27
When Loki says that the Chituari were "not kind", and I think back to the movie when the Other says "...ancient knowledge and new purpose." I am thinking along the lines of torture and brainwashing. Because after his life falling apart, falling through a wormhole, and failing (horribly) in his suicide attempt, I am guessing that Loki's mind was not in a happy place.
| Hola chapter 24 . 2/27
Just pointing out an inconsistency here. In the beginning of the Avengers movie, the Other says that Loki is ready to lead and the Chituari are ready to follow. So that would mean that the decision to invade Earth was already made before Loki set foot on Earth and not after as is said here.
| EagleJarl chapter 35 . 2/26
Well, things are starting to get back on track with our Big Damn Heroes. The interplay between Loki and Thor was touching and, as always, leaves me feeling sorry for Loki. Which I know he wouldn't like, but fortunately he's a fictional character so I don't have to care about what he likes.
Of course, it begs several questions...why didn't Thor hear Loki? Why didn't Heimdall tell Thor that he was needed **by his brother**? The most likely answer seems to be that Odin was preventing it, was actively choosing for Loki to continue being tortured. Which goes rather beyond "not winning father of the year" and into "outright villain".
A few edits:
"Coffe'd be great." :: Coffee
"Yes," he lies. "It prevented me from being hit by female scientists in passing cars." - funny!
deserts :: desserts (three times)
'I have located Mr Odinson's car.' - Odinson? Well, maybe he means "the car that Thor told us about"
| EagleJarl chapter 34 . 2/26
This is getting really intense. I'm supposed to be working right now and I'm having trouble closing this tab. There's only a couple of chapters left, so I hope this gets to some sort of breakpoint and doesn't end on a total cliffhanger.
Couple edits for you:
right he can to. :: too
when he his gaze :: when his
"The loungeroom?" Pepper suggests. - odd word. If Thor or Loki used it, I wouldn't blink, but I would expect Pepper just to say 'lounge' (unless this is another Right Pondianism?)
"Look, Tony," not-Clint say - wait, didn't he just prove that he IS Clint?
tripple-crossing :: triple
| EagleJarl chapter 30 . 2/26
Tony doesn't like being handed things directly, - is that really a thing for him? In the movie I thought that was just him vein difficult with Coulson
| EagleJarl chapter 29 . 2/26
And now I'm starting to sound like a pre-coffee'd Tony." - this made me laugh
Forgotten to charge my phone - this also made with the laughing :)
Or things could get very awkward very fast indeed. - How exactly? I don't follow Loki's thinking; what can Polt do, attack Stark Tower and take on Loki, the demigod; Captain America, a living legend who kinda lives up to the "legend" part; a man with truly epic anger management issues; the Invincible Iron Man, and two master assassins,
along with whatever defenses are on the tower? Yeah, let me know how that goes for you, Polt.
She'd probably look intimidating in a tutu and bunny slippers - I'm pretty sure she'd look terrifying in that outfit. Mostly because of the expression she'd be wearing, which would say "Go ahead. Laugh. I dare you. I *double dog* dare you"
second to slow :: too
torturing myself :: me
the info it :: on it
Important people there who want to see what they've paid for - this isn't wrong but it's punchier if you drop the 'who'
Why don't you like her?" - missing opening "
How is what he's wondering too. - clearer if you put single quotes around the 'how'
Clint snorts again and Loki sighs, deflating a little. - made me laugh yet again.
That plan is distressingly simple. -simple is good! I like simple!
| EagleJarl chapter 28 . 2/25
HUZZAH! Good guys: 2. Bad guys: running like scared little girls
Loki has stones the size of basket balls to pull that off. I'm glad it didn't last too long, and that he ended up getting something useful out of it.
doubts this anything :: this is
because his phoenix had been on that - don't worry Loki. They almost certainly did not manage to break the simcard.
And then they have gone and he is left with the empty silence. - Suckers. That's right, leave him alone for a while to "soften him up". By which I mean "give the Avengers time to show up and beat the stuffing and gravy out of you"
You were all :: all I had
you're best chance :: your
And then there is a crash in the distance - YES! YES! GET 'EM, AVENGERS! OORAH!