thanks for the update, loved it! can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter!

I love that Loki is the one to figure it out. He pretty good at knowing how people think.

Loved the meeting between Loki and Pepper. Loki would definitely be able to pull off the whole innocent face / puppy dog eyes.

I really hope to read more soon, I must find out what happens next! Also, thanks for always being so quick to update. :)

Do you think Thor will be entering the story anytime soon (or at all)?

Plot twist! Plot twists are great. I can go on forever about how great their interactions are. Very well characterized with dashes of humor, and Loki, while seemingly well behaved, is still his sharp as a whistle self. Also, Pepper, so cute.

oh! the plot thickens :) Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more

-Ellipsis aka ...

This is an interesting story with an intriguing set-up. Your writing flows nicely, and the characters interact in believable ways. Can't wait for more! :D

OHMYGOSH! This is fantastic, and I'm totally sitting on the edge of my seat here, wondering what's going to happen next. I love love love that it's Tony and Steve who teamed up to get Loki out, 'cause they're such different characters... rub eachother the wrong way, right? :)

And poor Loki! I was talking to a friend about him yesterday actually - that given the agelessness of the Asgard, and what he had to deal with all his life, that his behaviour on Earth was more a temper tantrum seeking some form, ANY form, of attention, than anything else. I mean, really? It's like he was shining a big ol'beacon out to everyone he could, "Look at me! Look at what I can do!" I think he just needs. Well. A hug would be a good start, no? ;D

Thanks for this fic, I'm loving it! And I'm all wondery over Fury now... and hoping for Loki!hugs in the future!

xx

This is officially my favorite ongoing story! I really love it and it was another great review! I can't wait to see what will happen - hurray for plot!

This story is so well done. I'm really excited about the increasingly complex conspiracy investigations. Not to mention that the interactions between the characters are so poignant in their simplicity. Great scene between Loki and Steve. And I love that you had a little Pepper/Tony. Really nice work! Can't wait for the next one. ;)

I just want to hug Steve so much. He and Tony are just the kind of friends that poor Loki needs. Please keep writting!

Ah how are you so good at writing Loki/Steve interactions? That was beyond touching and adorable and several kinds of awesome. I love Steve, and I really hope Loki will start seeing him as a friend- he's been through way too much shit.

Also, what the hell is with Fury? Yeah Phil died, but I would think he has more self-control than that. Is there something else going on there? Is Fury compromised?

I guess I'll have to wait to find out D: Fantastic job so far!

Fantastic story so far. I was rather disappointed to find there was no next button after this chapter. PLEASE update soon! I can't wait!

oh this is excellent :) poor loki *hugs* keep up the great work

-Ellipsis aka ...

Love the story, looking forward to the next chapter!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

LOKI LOVE!

I have to nitpick here: what's the problem with shipping to Germany? I've taken German classes and talked to multiple military members who have been stationed there. From what I gather, Germany is a very amiable nation and a valuable ally.

Other than that, you're doing great. I'm Marvel-illiterate, so I had to look Latveria up myself *shame* .