Well, this has intrigued the dark and twisty side of my mind quite nicely.

I truly hope there are updates to come. Extremely soon.

RXP

ahhh ommgggg!

but, frighteningly plausible given the previous sown lips and venom drips.

Succinct writing, brill style :)

You know this won't end well for Fury. Loki is used to harsher punishments than Nick could hope to dish out. After seeing one of your sons driven mad so he could murder his brother, then committing suicide, then being bound to a rock with chain made from your son's entrails, and having a poisonous snake drip acid venom into your face... well Nicky is out of his league. And Loki is not the forgiving sort. Neither is Thor and Thor actually worries about his little brother's safety. Yeah, this will go over like the proverbial lead balloon.

So was Thor in on this?

please continue

*makes horrified strangled noises*

THANK GOD THEY SAVED HIM

*cries* *pets Loki on the head*

Arrr, and you leave it like that? More!

Oh no! I wanted to read more! It's getting really interesting! Please update soon!

Moreeee pleaseeee! Please let the next chapter out soon!

I can't imagine SHIELD making this O.o

...

or maybe yes

Please please continue. I love a good angsty fic.

Just one flaw - definitely too short, but I guess from the summary that it's just the beginning.