Reviews for Show me heaven
QueenMoriarty5 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I loved the movie ! But i didnt read the book. PLZ CONTIUNE
magicians chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I like the idea and what you have done with your replacement original characters.
There are a few spelling errors and really, you should start a new line for speech. I also think you could improve your description.
Slytherinbaby101 chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
It is really good so far! You only have a few spelling errors and missing punctuation! But I love it so far:)