|Reviews for The Orange Obsession|
| Sexy-Whales chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Only one problem I have with this story: the natto. Oh, nasty. Fermented bean snot is what my sister calls it. Len, how could you /eat/ that in the morning... no, how could you eat that ever?
BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WAS BEAUTIFUL! Especially that last scene I'm so glad she remembered! Oh, so sweet I need fluff every now and again.
Agh! I don't know what to end with! It's usually some urge to update faster, but this was a oneshot. Screws with my mind, dude. Sooo... ahm... keep writing...? XD
| AliasStars chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
I like it a lot
It's really cute
Do more stories like this
Just one quick question: If she's in fourth grade, and he's three years older, wouldn't he be in seventh? Just asking cuz I'm in eighth and my bro's in fifth. I'm three years older. JUST WONDERING! XD
But really great story otherwise
| Luscia Da Pimp chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
i always wondered if you lost your memory wouldn't that mean you forgot to talk, since you remembered how to talk?
good story, but i was a bit confused, with the times and the scenes . so like put 2 years later, at the sexy underwear shop, you don't have to i was just saying.
but make more and these chapters are long so i like that.
| SheWhoLeavesCrappyReviews chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I'm liking this one already. I must say, I like your writing style. Your descriptions aren't the types that make me just skip over them for their... lameness XD
That, and the plot's pretty interesting. Sure there are already some stories like this, but the way you write make it seem original.
Besides that, I got confused when the summary said twincest even though they aren't actually twins here since Len's older by three years. But then I read your A/N. Oh well.
Looking forward to the next chapter... if there are gonna be more.
| Clavemien Nigram Rosa chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Lovely work, as always :-)
| Happiness Sunshine and Gum chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
It was really cute.
I already read like a bunch of stories where Akaito tried to rape Rin.
Its ironic howits almost always him XD
Well, there weren't many mistakes and it has a very interesting plot!