Reviews for Mother's Day
TymanTB chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
The way you wrote the story was amazing, with your wording and such. I especially loved how you kept the characters exactly how they are, something most fanfics don't do. You also had an excellent plot. It made sense to me that Lloyds mom wouldn't show, and that Ray would help out Erica. I love this story :)
costley51 chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
This story was delightful. It seems very appropriate that Lloyds mother didn't show. But I also like that Julianne's mother invited him. And of course Erica would have a hard time on Mother's Day.