Reviews for Redemption
NulledandVoided chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
Me: I LOVE THIS STORY! I BLAME YOU FOR ME SHIPPING THEM NOW!

Domino: It's alright.

Me: It's not "alright" it's PERFECT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Kangarooblu chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
OMG! I LOVE THIS! It is wonderfully written and a great story! Please update soon!
POPTARTS chapter 5 . 12/28/2012
MORE NOW!
POPTARTS chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
Awwwww. I can never hate Asura! He is so cute. I am in love in with him so much! I also am VERY TERRIFIED of him.
POPTARTS chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Wow. Cant remember anything but three months before anything. This is...wow.
POPTARTS chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
Wow that is so cool using Asura as a student under the name of Adrian. GeiNus!
POPTARTS chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Good prologue and I hate prologues.
Skyerider chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
Great story! It's so hard to get a good fiction with Asura in it. I love the idea and almost everything about it. Keep writing and keep going because this is shaping up to be a great story.
maximum scythe123 chapter 5 . 12/11/2012
hey just got done with this and all i can say is you better update soon becuse this is amazing, normaly i'm more of a maka and soul type person but this is REALLY good. please udate soon!
ps: i agree on the fact that IB is the best game ever :)
LnknInsanity chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
Can't wait for next chapter. Please update soon.
xxXLoneWolfXxx chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
I thpught i was still on chapter 1 and soon i look down and its like chapter 5?! It cant beeeee! Theres not a chapter 6! Noooooooooooooo! Lol awesome story! I live love LOVE LOOOOOOVE it! Write more though pleeeeeeeeease!?
Szayel's Angel chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
Do update soon mah love. Byesies
silentharleyfan chapter 5 . 11/7/2012
Love the story! Maybe for the next chapter have adrian sleep walk with asura in control?
CrimsonSkyKnight chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Awesome chapter! Good job I like it
Noodlegum chapter 5 . 10/22/2012
omg omg omg omg. i love your story and how you are not rushing the character development, too much (take your time with it. it is always more rewarding that way) this is a GREAT idea, and pertty out of the box for this anime. Overall, the plot is very unique and i really cant wait to see how it will reveal it itself. i hope you keep up this great work, and not let it go to a waste. Your imagination, plot, characters, and your writing style are great. The only thing i think you need to improve are; length, organizing your sentence structure, and give your readers a deeper understanding of the characters and what they go through, plus their thoughts. But of course, all this comes with time and practice so it's nothing to fret over and think to deeply in trying to improve it. It will come naturally as you writing progresses. (:
anyways, i'll shut up now! update soon!
wish you the best in writing,
inchausti
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