|Reviews for Finally|
| Ryker Strom chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Aww ... this is so cute! It's so nice to see Sebastian doing that. And I'm glad Seblaine happened without infidelity, that's always a huge plus in my book :)
| Frenchii chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
It's a cute storyline, and an interesting road you followed, inspired by such an important incident in Klaine's relationship. An interesting oneshot that made me smile, even though I love Klaine.
Your paragraphing could use some work, as a single paragraph shouldn't go for this long. Remember: When someone else starts talking, or a different train of thought enters the character's head, it's a new paragraph. Also, grammar is important. Capitals and full stops, etc.
Interesting plot, but character development and general technique should be worked on.
But great start!