I can't wait for the next chapter!

The opening prologue was interesting. I think Ezio saw everything that was wrong with nobility in one fell swoop in Louise's actions. I really hope you go back to it later.
The conversation at Theoleyre's shop was perfect. And Theoleyre himself was a very interesting character, like a diamond in the rough.
The accents give the whole thing some foreign flavor. Keep doing it.
Louise, Ezio, and Derflinger make a hilarious comedy team when they have a conversation.
Your version of the inn felt like it was keeping it realistic and gives it an Assassin's Creed flavor. I wouldn't mind seeing Scarron and Jessica get a bigger role in the story.
The fight scene felt fluid, energetic, and realistic, especially with Ezio making use of the environment for the fight. A good fighter should always take advantage of the surroundings.
And finally, is Ezio going to end up starting the Tristain chapter of the Assassin's Order here? It feels like he's in the preliminary stages of it right now.

I think you're improving with the translation section. The odd bit of humor here and there makes it feel like I'm reading a piece of info from the Animus. Now if only there was a bit of snark in it along with some British references then I can imagine it in Shaun's voice.

How come Fouquet didn't mention Tiffania? Is she dead in this universe?
Also, thumb's up for the translations and contextual information. Really helpful. Please keep it up for all later chapters.

I like the conversation between Kirche and Louise. It really showed that Kirche really cares about Louise despite her sharp words. Of course, it also showed she really wanted to bed Ezio, but that's another story.
About Fouquet, her willingness to ruthlessly kill innocents and guards alike seems a bit off to me. I mean, she grew up with Tiffania and her kids before she became a thief. I just can't see her ruthlessly murdering children that are in her way.
About the fight scene, why didn't Ezio use one of his pistols? It could have penetrated the stone armor she was using. At least, it wouldn't have hurt to try.
Otherwise, this is an excellent story. Keep it up.

Two things: Best crossover fanfic ever for zero no tsukaima! I really hope you do finish it.
Second thing: someone skilled at drawing NEEDS to draw little Louise as the apprentice assassin she already is, with her little badass assassin hood and all

Nice I can see how you pull Louise by her loyalties, I guess mentioning her mother and her rule of steel thing to me sounds too much like a templar family would look like.

Or is Kirche the Templar it can be the least one you suspect.

I'm loving this story.

I really love how this chapter brought in the Assassin's Creed 'feel'. Can't wait for Ezio to start 'investing' in every boarded up shop and worn down architecture to rebuild the city. :)

As always, a very interesting chapter from you. I wish that you would continue this, but take your time.

Really enjoying the story. I think the characterization that you have done with ezio is fantastic. Waiting eagerly for next chapter

Not to be supportive of ageism...

But seriously mon ami I do think that having a 67 year old as a protagonist is interesant!

Just wandered back to this and remembered why I liked it so much on the first place. And now it even has proper plot going! Please update it it's quite good.

Good to see a new chapter, I had forgotten about this and just finished re-reading it. I really do like your interpretation or Louise, I like it when authors fix problems rather the pointing them out (like in bashing fics, thankfully not that common in the familiar of zero section) can't wait for more chapters

An excellent chapter like always. I didn't even realize this story had gained a new chapter. I apparently hadn't even favorit'ed it last time that I read it. Stupid of me I know. Actually, I can't even remember which chapter I read last time so it isn't that much of a problem. Either way, this is a very interesting start. I'm starting to enjoy this crossover type although there aren't many decent ones to read...

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