wow...just wow im loveing this so far!

Very original, I love it,

Wonderful story! I hope you update soon. Really love your work.

cool

I definitely love this original take on Louise and the sheer amount of detail in the worldbuilding you've put in here. I've never played Assassin's Creed, but I know the basics of it, and thus far you've got yourself a fan now!

Brought in an original manner, filled with intrigue and good world building. I can easily recommend this to others for some very enjoyable reading!

This is awesome. Not only has this fic gotten me into Familiar of Zero, but it is also exceptionally well written. The storyline is good, not rushing into things too fast but at the same time not so slow as to bore readers. The way you have written Ezio into the story is also fantastic, even more so when you consider that you've edited him in whilst keeping just about all the characters in character, and where they aren't, such as with Guiche , there is a plausible reason for it. Really one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. I can't wait to read more!

Y U ONLY HAVE 5 CHAPTERS!

Great story! Hope to see more!

A good story, well written and versed. I feel that it flows right and the way you have depicted both Ezio and Louise. I think your depiction of Louise is fitting seeing how you make her go through the motions and such, where as other stories put her in this sort of Mary Sue stage. Ezio also feels natural and in his element when he duels Guiche and starts to train Louise and Guiche. Very well done. I do wish to see more in the time to come. :3

Fantastic writing, and excellent research. Enzio is always in character, this is a pleasure to read. Definitely Favorited:D

Its the summer now plz write

I really like your story and to let you know I appreciate the work you put into it.

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I love it soooooooooooooooo much! Please keep writing, this is such an amazing story! I love how you have portrayed Louise, and you have done magnificently with Ezio's character. The seriousness of the story, along with the humour and exciting fights make for excellent reading. Your attention to detail is good too. There are probably some things that could be improved but I am currently blindsided by this bright and shining sun we humans call fan fiction. Excellent work, keep it up.
I hope your exams went well.
Did I mention this story is awesome?

fun, and i wonder at this they Do know that they are a;; sqishy right? a godzilla doesnt help unless it protects YOU cause if your controlling the godzilla you make a far better target than others and as you put your strength into a monster and not yourself it leaves you vulnerable.

You know Ezio doesnt kill people in their sleep all that often does he? a shame the commeners just diddnt wait till the nobels were sleeping and do mass murder? well im sure they HAVE done that just not on a global scale at least

oh well Ezio can subourne a few magicians and train up some Assasins to kill all the magic/templars people. Ezio hasent taken a country in a game before city states sure but a full country? be an intresting war

Interesting fic, I'm refreshed to see Louis summoning someone (not evil aligned) denying to become her pet slave in the initial introduction, it always bugged me in FoZ crossovers to see a "good" character being summoned and do the "greet, ask what's going on, accepts binding" routine. Because even though they're "good", as we know it, it makes no sense that they'd just accept becoming someone's property.

Also glad to see Ezio putting Louis down for her childish attempts at power play, instead of gritting his teeth and accepting the task of undies washing or helping her dress. I've seen so many variations of the teeth-grinding on prideful characters that it makes me grind MY teeth on how OOC they're behaving. (Though you gave a decent explanation on why Ezio went with the undies washing, so...)

I'm hoping to see some divergence on the storyline, so far I see that you've kept to the outline of "find out Guiche's two-timing, call him out, inevitable duel, wins duel" scenario, while I get it's important to Guiche's character development, I really feel that it's sort of beyond Ezio's... I dunno, concern or, "realm"? Because Saito was a normal guy with normal views, I guess, since we can say that Ezio is definitely levels beyond that, I feel he shouldn't "play" through the same scene that Saito did.

Anyway, decent fic, and I look forward to your next update.