Awesome chapter.

Awesome chapter.

Very well Written,Loving the Plot so far,And Ezio a Familiar!,I nearly Laughed myself Sick just thinking about what he's Going to be Like With Louise!

TT Soo glad there's a crossover for these two...!

Good, good! This read much better than the last two chapters.

I have to say, your descriptions are quite good. I like the picture you've reimagined or the Academy. Also liked the look of Colbert's laboratory. I pleasantly amused at how you incorporated the game's mechanics into Ezio's senses.

And I forgot to mention this last time, but your character interactions are refreshingly different. You've given depth to the base material that wasn't quite there before.

So, all this to say, great chapter!

Nicely done... And for the record, I only threaten the hit team on stories I like _. anyway, I look forward to future chapters. Having a young Ezio with all his later experience... That is a dangerous thing indeed...

Thanks for the update. Good chapter, pretty detailed and you managed to write Ezio pretty well just like his character in the AC. Even the character from ZnT here feels like they can be fitted to AC's atmosphere. You adapt all the character well.

Disregard my earlier review. Rather than out of character, everyone just appears to be a bit more prejudiced/less silly. A good AU and good writing thus far.

The story is interesting since its AC. The contruction is coherent and the flow of the story is so clear that I cry while reading some lines.

Colbert seems a bit out of character but the writing is fine otherwise.

Both chapters were written very well, though I felt that the grammar was off in some parts. Almost like a word was missing.

So was Ezio "youth"-inized by the familiar contract? I'm also curious how a "commoner" noble like him will adapt to a magic ruled society. I hope you include Count Mott, I'd love to see how Ezio rescues Siesta.

This is such a great story so far, I am glad to have found it as I have, I shall be waitng patiently for the next part, I look forward to the next part. I truly wonder what was happening to Ezio.

this will not end well update soon

Woah, this is very good. You seem to have a good grasp on your version of Halkeginia, and your setup looks very interesting.

I don't normally follow stories with only one update, but this one turned out to be a seccessful gamble.

Im not to sure about Ezio's quick change of heart towards staying but im grateful it did'nt turn too dark this early in the story. Feels like it's gonna get worse for Louise before it gets better. Also am i right to guess that the familiar runes will reguvenate our poor tired assasin somewhat? Lookin forward to chapter 3.