|Reviews for The Broken God|
| majestic.beauty.sealed.in.ice chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
words can hot express how hot this is 0_0 ... yep... there are no words... but the ending was hilarious! and since its so hot and funny its on y favs!
| Ryane-Foxx chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Hot. Damn! That was beyond sexy and cold shower worthy :) plus it was very touching at the end. Loved the playful demanor as well :)
| shadowcat chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
wow just wow absolutely fantastically written, very believable loved it!
| CheshireCatGinger14 chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Kudos for your first fic! I liked it. Oh and Thor calling Captain America, Steven? Nice touch.
Oh and your 'poor person' statement at the beginning made me laugh xD
| go thundershield chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
that was amazing and really hot
| FallenCastiel chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This is sooo not your first fic! Awesome job! P.S. MOAR!
| Post U Later chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Okay. That Was Deep In More Than One Meaning. & Also Hot... Very. VERY Hot! ;D
I've Never Actually Read A Fic Where Thor Was The Bottom... Well Know I Have. Thank You For Such An Awesome Story. X3
| Water Lily14 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I... I... OMFG! It's beautiful! I love it! I like this pairing a lot and this had me completely enamored until the end. Then I was thinking of what could happen in the bath! *giggle* Oh the possibilities that idea holds. Good work with the details too. :) You just keep doing your thing because it's just beautiful.
| kogouma chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
there should be a sequel.
a sequel that has everything to do
with that .the perverted part of
my mind greatly likes that idea :D
| Warlady chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
| survivor girl1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
There should totally be a sequel. Just saying.
| MarineLvr84 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Holy mother of god...that was hot
| Shiro Demon chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Ok this is utterly amazing work, this is your first fic? for real? Because maaaaan... that was hot as hell.
I read the first review on this story and let me tell you that is absolutely wrong, this fic is completelly In Character, so just ignore that "S" person.
Just a little critique, i guess... there's to much reading in a single paragraph and that makes the reading a little to heavy, try to separate them a little more and give a little more "Enters", k?
Love it, excelent work ;D
| belovedkakasi chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Oh God! It's so wonderful!
Actually, it's my first turn to read a Steve/Thor M rating fic, I usually think the love between them is like friendship most or something like that. But your fic is so hot and beautiful that my opinion is totally changed.
I don't think it's ooc, but exactly ic. The thunder God may also feel sad, tired and being broken, and he couldn't express his feelings and weaknesses, because no one could understand him perfectly. But Captain is absolutely different. He has the same experiences as Thor, and he is so gentle and kind, he could comfort him.
I love your story very much, and if you don't mind, I want to translate it into Chinese and share it with friends, may I have your permission? Of course you will reserve all your rights! Thank you!
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 5/31/2012