|Reviews for Killing Four|
| Noip13 chapter 31 . 2/25
Wow. Just wow. I don't usually like Divergent fanfic, and I'm not a huge fan of the books, but this was pretty amazing. For starters, you seem to have duplicated the author's writing abilities and planted them in your head, because I can find no difference in writing style. It's amazing how very close you are to her. But actually, I think I might like you a bit more, because I have rarely felt anything while reading the Divergent series, but I felt a lot for Four while reading this. The poor guy…
This is a perfect POV story. A mirror flip, done well in the author's writing style, matching the book enough to be familiar while adding in enough new scenes, emotions, and ideas to keep things interesting. It's a bit like a crossover: A fine balance is needed. You found it. Congratulations, and wonderful story, thank you for posting it.
| milner chapter 31 . 2/17
Well done. Loved every minute of it. Thank you.
| milner chapter 23 . 2/17
"What if I don't want to do this anymore?"
| NerdyBear chapter 31 . 1/23
| Overachiever chapter 31 . 1/6
I love this story so much! I have read a ton of fanfictions, but none of them are as well written as yours, and very few are finished. This story is amazing. Well done.
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/6
This was amazing. You are a wonderful writer. I totally knew you were a female because the passion for some of the things could only be tied to a female. Thank you for writing this. I have been looking for the last chapters of this book for forever and I am so glad I found them. Keep writing and I can not wait to see what else you come up with.
| Happytunes79 chapter 31 . 10/27/2013
Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into this! I have really enjoyed reading reading your work! I loved this last chapter. The emotional roller coaster that goes on in his head is piercing. I love it! Please feel free to set up a Facebook page that you can link your writings to. I think you have lots of fans out there already! Good luck in your next venture. P.s. any thoughts about happy ending rewrite for alliegent? Lol. Just a thought.
| OMGGIRLLOL chapter 12 . 10/22/2013
love this part
| SheIsFierce chapter 31 . 10/8/2013
I've been looking forward to this chapter for so long. I couldn't puzzle it out for myself- what happened to make Tobias have a seemingly sudden change of heart after finding Tris with Marcus. But I knew you would give me a plausible, wonderful, beautifully written answer. And of course you did! I'm so happy you took this all the way to the end! So thank you! This whole story is just amazingly written and I really don't have the words to tell you how great I think this story is (chapter 21 is my fav, btw) and what an incredible writer you are. I know I'm going to be disappointed when I read Four's POV in that other story coming out soon. (;
I hope I get the chance to read an original story of yours. You will let all your fans here know when we can do that, right? Thanks for sharing your amazing talent. Carry on!
| giggy24601 chapter 31 . 10/7/2013
WOW JUST WOW! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! exactly what i pictured!
| ShootingStar96 chapter 31 . 10/6/2013
This is absolutely AMAZING! You should be so proud of this story. Congratulations on finishing it!
| cbsunshine14 chapter 31 . 10/6/2013
You will never know how happy I was when I got an email for a new chapter. It made my day. You are amazing, and I love this story to it's fullest extent. I honestly doubt, in my opinion, the VR could top this. Please keep writing. You are a gem to the writing world :)
| kaleidoscope42 chapter 31 . 10/5/2013
Ahhh what a great ending! I love what goes through Tobias' mind when he sees Tris in Jeanine's office and how he circles back around to trusting her. It fits perfectly and feels exactly right. I think now I'll go back and reread the whole thing uninterrupted :)
Thank you for writing this! Being in Tobais' head for Insurgent has been such a pleasure. And good luck with your original stuff! You're a fantastic writer and I hope I read it someday.
| AwesomeTooAwesome chapter 31 . 10/4/2013
So amazing I can't even Just like amazing... U r soo awesome!
| The Ferriswheel chapter 31 . 10/4/2013
This is the end. This was a beautifully completed Four point of view story and I hold it to the highest standard. Thanks for writing & don't stop