|Reviews for Romeo and Juliet 2|
| Daking27539 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
| KeelanCetinich chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It has a few spelling errors, but it seems like it can go somewhere if you keep having ideas to throw into the hat. I'll keep checking back for more chapters. :)
| PotatoLand chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Your grammar has a few errors. Remember to put your dialogue in quotations, and review "Your/You're" and plurals/possessives(Montague's/Montagues, Romeo/Romeo's).
Other than that...this is looking a bit like a screenplay, which isn't necessarily a problem. In fact, I think the Narrator is really funny! However, it might serve you well to drop the Mel Brooks references and camera angles.
It's so awesome that you're writing a new take on this awesome story!
Your friend, Potato