Reviews for Romeo and Juliet 2
notaskrub chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
good job
KeelanCetinich chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It has a few spelling errors, but it seems like it can go somewhere if you keep having ideas to throw into the hat. I'll keep checking back for more chapters. :)
PotatoLand chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Your grammar has a few errors. Remember to put your dialogue in quotations, and review "Your/You're" and plurals/possessives(Montague's/Montagues, Romeo/Romeo's).

Other than that...this is looking a bit like a screenplay, which isn't necessarily a problem. In fact, I think the Narrator is really funny! However, it might serve you well to drop the Mel Brooks references and camera angles.

It's so awesome that you're writing a new take on this awesome story!

Your friend, Potato