|Reviews for Harry's Trial|
| Fallenangel700 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I found it fairly well written until about halfway through after that it seemed very a first chapter of a story i feel it would have been good but because of it being a one shot and a short oneshot at that there didnt seem to be much point in it as we dont even see the fall out from the trial.
I find it contradicting that harry wouldnt take orders from molly weasley due to her not being his guardian but then obeyed the order to apologize from remus lupin who is also not his guardian
| iscarascaresyou chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Alright for the spelling errors Arour - Auror Wizengotment - Wizengamont
Truth Serum Veritaserum
Those thin mints were good
| redstickbonbon chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Overall, I liked your story. Good concept, and who doesn't like to see Harry beat Fudge at his own game? However, detracting from the story are numerous spelling errors. 'Weasley', 'Sirius', 'Shacklebolt', 'Wizengamot', 'obliviated' are all misspelled, as well as several others words. In particular, 'trial' is misspelled close to a half dozen times. Again, it's a good story, it's just that the spelling errors take away from it.