|Reviews for Time of the Month|
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2016
PLEASE keep writing
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2016
I'm so happy you decided to keep writing this :)
Please keep updating.
| hero-madness123 chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
This is so interesting! Continue! There arent many fics with a love triangle between them!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2014
Please KEEP GOING:)
| Anon chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
Good story but Fitzroy doesn't know the truth so to him Artemis Sharp is Dylan's uncle, not father. Deryn also wouldn't let on that he's actually her father. I think. I could be wrong.
| cody murphy chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
mein Gott, das war genial! great story so far! cant wait for the next chapter!
| spacetarkay chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
Mens' boxer shorts are a much later innovation; almost certainly the aviators would wear long underwear of silk or merino.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This story is great! PLEASE UPDATE! This has a great storyline forming and I cannot wait to see what you think up next! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Keep on writing! I love the idea of Newkirk falling for Deryn!
| DaUndertoad chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
Suggestive stuff.. XDXDXDXD
| yay chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
So Fitzroy's father is dead?
| yay chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
A deep history? I need to see the history before I can make any judgements, although right now N/D or A/D are both looking pretty good.
| yay chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Newkirk's dilmma is interesting. One question - so WAS he crushing on Dylan before?
| yay chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Periods are something rarely considered in books where girls pretend to be boys, and it is something I wondered about. What will she do with the "period cloths"? Lauder them? Throw them off the airship? How will she explain their presence?
| wordsequalmagic chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
Newkwirk is awesome. I like this version of Fitzroy also :)