Reviews for Undeserved Detention
Gisel123 chapter 1 . 4/22
Wow! In 335 words, you managed to make a wonderful story!
Sweet, crisp and perfect!
Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 2/3
You should continue this! This feels unfinished!
Toodleoo chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Protective Papa Snape! This is darling. I enjoy the twist, where the Mr. Potter we're expecting turns out to be Harry's son. :D
TycheSong chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Haha-I want to know what happens next! This is so in character for him, it's brilliant!
lolaoz chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Aww, so sweet. Love it! X
JeniDRalph chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Yes, he can take away points and assign detentions. He's a daddy to a daughter. I think he would have done precisely that.
Rosajean chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
That was adorable! Loved it!
Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Cute!
notwritten chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I like it Keep smiling. :-)
dayflow chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
very cute and nice reveal! :-)
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Eileen is Severus' mother's name. Well written, and cute! :)
Still-On-Hiatus chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
And I thought that was Harry. Seriously. XD

-jB
use2b2t2 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Great!
Silver1226 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Aww, that was just adorable _
JL in Boots chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
I really enjoyed this.
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