|Reviews for Metal Heart|
| kye major chapter 2 . 2/2
Lmfao my fav part was the masturbation/narcissism part
| BookWorm4479 chapter 15 . 1/24
I like this story, but why? WHY is Every. Single. Solitary. Character. Gay? Every. One.
I'll spot you Charles/Eric, that's TOTALLY cannon.
There is nothing wrong with being straight, or even asexual. It'd be nice to get some diversity. Some people lead happy productive lives without a romantic partner at all.
Also, I adore how well you've meshed mutants into the new cinematic 'verse. Go you!
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/16
I love how you had Heimdall effirtlessly vrake the fourth wall and how it seemed to fit perfectly.
| TearsOfEbony chapter 30 . 1/14
YOU ARE MY GOD. AHEM... What I mean to say; this fic is amazing. It made me squeal, it made me laugh, and I almost cried at one point. Thank you for writing this! Loved it. Especially the epilogue. xD
| OBSESSEDWITHYAOI chapter 30 . 1/4
| Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 30 . 12/13/2013
Oh my gosh, I can't really say that I've imagined Fury in any relationship before, but dang! This is certainly one I'd have NEVER thought of! I love the rest of the story, very moving, and I ended up staying up all night just to read this! I haven't found a story I liked that much in years! So thank you for this wonderful thing. I have yet to move on to the sequel, obviously, but is there going to be more of Heimdall and Fury in it, along with everyone else? And am I right when I think that Heimdall was meaning Rhodey is Thor and Steve's third?
Well, I'm excited for the continuation of this story and shall read more tomorrow. Maybe. I have a thing where I only sometimes read incomplete stories, and I currently have no knowledge of if the sequel is complete or not sooo... Eh. Ciao!
| Tacpebs chapter 30 . 12/9/2013
Whoooo! Awesome! Awesome story. Loved it! Thank you!
| Unhappy chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
Why in your story are you picking on Steve/Captain America? I don't think Bruce would be that catalytic towards him, Tony maybe, but they wouldn't be this angsty.
| contest4jen chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
OMG the ending! I just broke out in laughter! Hilarious! I love this story. Good job :)
| EdgeofDarkness chapter 30 . 11/29/2013
I'll be honest. Initially, I only clicked on this story because the link was colored purple, which meant I'd already read through it once, and I didn't remember it. I honestly didn't know if I wanted to read a 30 chapter story. I wasn't sure on some of the pairings, either. (Steve/Thor is a new one to me, and so is Tasha/Pepper.) I'm so glad I clicked it, though.
I cried, more than a few times. I giggled a lot, too, and got some extremely strange looks from people in the room for it. I may or may not have also yelled "Oh shit" "Fuck no" "Go for it Tony" and other various things.
This was extremely well written. You gave the characters such depth. I love that none of them are "omg i luv you marry me", despite what my inner spaz wants. Their darker sides were all pulled into focus in a wonderfully brutal way. I've never been a fan of the Avengers just out and out crying before, but I don't think you over did it at all, and when they cried, it felt so believable and heartbreaking. I also loved watching all of their relationships grow.
The plot kept me guessing, which is wonderful. (Though I do admit, I totally called the Heimdall/Fury bit at the end.)
I will definitely go read the sequel now
So sorry for rambling like that! It's just past 3 am here, which I'll use an excuse.
(Also I think I totally know who the "other" Heimdall hinted at is. Like, fairly certain.)
| MechaBunny chapter 30 . 11/27/2013
I would seriously be crying right know if it wasn't for the fact that I'm a heartless bastard, metal or not (:3), and that my computer is lagging...
You achieved something few writers could create- a world of fiction, that branches of "true" fiction in it's own, completely unique way. \ \/ /
( U U)
| Lilywonders chapter 30 . 11/24/2013
ALKFJ;dalfkdsja I can't even. This story is the most amazing thing ever! I've literally spent the whole day reading it. I've literally had to go outside in the the freezing weather because of all the feels. I can't.
But honestly, this is one of best stories I've ever read on here, and I love that it involves so much understanding of the Marvel world, and it's just great.
| eltigre221 chapter 30 . 11/23/2013
damn, great ending, and nice how Fury got together with Heimdall :) hehe and very funny how the hammer reappeared, taking Clint down with him XD I loved the ending, everything is in place, and I will be enjoying the one-shots sequel :) until more, later and have fun writing :)
| Shoetsu Otaku chapter 30 . 11/14/2013
Hahahaha, an omniscient god with a powerful mortal that fakes omniscience to get things done. Perfect match!
| Shoetsu Otaku chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Tony Stark (mental depression) Bruce Banner (mental depression)
All in all, they're a perfect couple! They both believe that
Themselves anything else disaster