|Reviews for Static|
| xx Eneko xx chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I read this on tumblr, but MAN
THAT HIT ME RIGHT HER 3
IN THE FEELS.
It flowed so nicely, the way it was written. It was smooth, and I could really tell the mood of the whole story. and when you finally got to the end-it all made sense.
This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, and is most definitely the best StanxKyle one ever :)
| Jizena chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This is one of my favorite stories. The flow of it really grabs me, the way the present and past weave in and out, building on what was and could have been, right up until the break at the end. I've read this a couple of times now and it still shocks and saddens me to the point of tears, but in a way that makes me love the story and feel for Stan more. His depression in this is so tangible. There's a line that really stands out to me toward the end: "And they go inside and it's so bright and clean and sterile, and Stan feels so uncomfortable, so out of place. He's ready to just turn around and go home[...]" and he has such a clear definition in his head of what 'home' is, that he's always willing to go back there, no matter how he appears to Wendy and Kenny—and Wendy is so delightfully patient and real—Stan is always kind of swimming in those memories of home, of Kyle. It's just wonderful.
| Llama-Egg chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Wow. This story is absolutely beautiful. The writing flows so easily, so smoothly. Perfect. And when the 'truth' is revealed everything clicks and makes sense, making this tragic story all the more sadder.
I love the realism of this story, as much as I hate it. It's so damn sad, and yet touching. I love the story, I really do.
Thank you so much. I feel so blessed to have been able to read such a beautiful, touching piece of work.
| Moodle chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
...I am so depressed now. Holy shit.
This was beautiful. ;_; Your writing is absolutely fantastic.
| Jordanifying chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
cries omg this is soooo good
please make a sequel plz
| HarvardDropout chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
I REALLY HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY NOW THAT YOU'VE MADE A GROWN MAN CRY, ALRIGHT.
Seriously, this was absolutely beautiful and... Jesus Christ, the ending! If you didn't at least have that I'm pretty sure I'd have to cut myself off from EVER reading another Style fic again because dgklsdg I can't even think right now. Just, wow. This was awesome. I'm not even much of a Style shipper but this gave me hardcore feels alright. I can't even... fml. I love this so much.
| Feets chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
probably one of the most beautiful things I have read. God damnit. I'm crying as well as the rest of your readers. this was intense in the emotional aspect as well as physically demanding for how well you portrayed the characters. I can't review well but I wanted to say that it was incredible.
| death in the afternoon chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I dont know if im sad that theres only a few reviews on this or happy that im one of the few who get to read it, becasue this was amazing and it made me laugh and cry and feel like shit and feel what Stan was feeling and what Kyle was and what Wendy was. So basically it was amazing and im very glad you posted it. :)
| twyde chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
i'm crying like a little bitch.
This is seriously the most moving thing i've ever been through. God, I will be crying for hours.
| emerald-SP chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
What the actual fuck, man?
Excuse my cussing but this story only has FOUR review? Where the hell do I begin? First of all, when I read this, I was sobbing like a little bitch. You literally DESTORYED me for a few hours. Everything was fine. I was half way through thinking "It'll be fine. Kyle will make Stan better and they'll live hapily ever after just like in every Style fanfic" but then when it dawned upon me that Kyle was DEAD... wow. No, I can't even... It all came crashing down how Stan was alone and sick and just dead inside.
If you'd left it there I don't think I could have gone on living. The heaven part afterwards was the most perfect ending. That's all I can really say.
The raw emotion and way you described Stan's depression.. It was beautiful and scarily realistic. I think that this is just about the BEST "sad" fan fiction I've ever read. I truely mean that. Nothing I've read has ever made me cry so hard. (But now I feel stupid.)
Sorry for such a long-ass review but... that's what you deserve for ripping out my heart and shattering it into pieces and then sewing it back together... barely. All I can say now is; you should be a published author or SOMETHING. Your talent is beyond amazing. Stan and Kyle's relationship is FAR stronger to me now, no matter what's happening in the show. Keep writing and I'm sure I'll read this a million times over.
| icingsugar chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Oh god, I amcrying right now. This was the most heartbreaking fic I have read in a long time...and im not usually a style fan but this was one brilliant fic. I had a hunch...but the truth was still shocking..your descriptions of kyle was so beautiful, I felt like I was actually stan and felt everything he was going through. The love scenes were perfect...brilliant. overall I am very impressed by this fic..despite being upset as well :p really good job!
| elweevil chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Oh my gosh, this is beautiful!
It was so easy to become immersed within Stan's thoughts/stream of consciousness. The love and pain were all too easy to feel along with him. You had me so worried throughout the entire fic (for both Kyle and Stan) and I didn't really see what was coming, heh. But when I did, the hints you'd dropped throughout suddenly clicked.
One thing I really enjoyed about it was that you left the finer aspects of their personalities out of the story, which suited it perfectly. For me, at least, this made it easier to connect to. Much of the focus was on the general idea of the relationship and the emotions behind it rather than on details, such as in-depth conversations. Instead, the words chosen to be between them were just enough to convey all that was needed.
...As someone who has read more 'style fics' than is healthy, this is easily within my top three. There is something about it that has me thinking back to it at random points during the day, and this something has made me read it twice already.
Thanks so much for writing this! :)
| SomeRandomGuy chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
...A very powerful thing to read, I can almost see the emotions; the hate, happiness and of course despair. A great piece of work.
| SqueakGirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
This was such a moving story. So sad and bitter sweet. But I still loved it. I'm glad you're posting it here so I have a chance to fave it!