|Reviews for Leaf|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE.
| Midnight the Black Fox chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I really hope you can update this at some point I really wanna know what happens :D
| TheNinjaOfFire chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I love this story ! Please continue.
| RageRunsStill chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
You updated? Huzzah! That was faster than I thought possible... :p I wish I was that fast, but I have to bellyache over every detail of my plots (typically) before writing them. Oh well.
This is going to be fun. I can't wait to see where it leads!
Not much to comment on as it stands. By way of grammar, I noticed multiple places where you needed to either add a comma, remove a comma, replace a punctuation mark with a semicolon or dash... It's the most common errors on FFN, so don't worry about it too much; however, I recommend a good beta to anyone who wants to get better with their grammar, spelling and punctuation, because a good beta could teach you more of the important ones.
Perhaps I will come back later and actually tell you what needs to be fixed, but at the moment, I'm short on time. Just know that this story is wonderful! :D Can't wait!
| GlassyTheRosePen chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Yay the sequel! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
| SkipperPrivate chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Sweet. I like it already