|Reviews for Love is a hard road to walk|
| Neoneoneobanana chapter 3 . 5/4/2004
Umm, Squallywally is a bit too OOC for me...
| Neoneoneobanana chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Gah, That was CUTE.
| Grasshopper2 chapter 3 . 5/9/2003
Usually when I read a sad story I put *cries* but I'm not really crying. That's not true for this story. I actually started to cry. Thank you for such a good story.
| Umm chapter 3 . 4/19/2003
Hello since when does Zell love anything but hotdogs? Squall is way out of character. He went from being an intovert to a pimp when. SquallQuistis a strange out of character story that totally sucks. God squall would not cheat on Rinoa. I don't know if you intended for the part about Zell reading hamlet to be funny but it's hilarious to think of Zell reading Dr. Sues let alone shakespear. Suicide ending oh that dropped the rating I'm about to give you 2 points
Plot:0 (there is none)
Pairings:-1 (z/r? even worse than sq/qu![thats almost impossible]
Develepment:1 ( Um two pages and Zell is going to propose? AND Squall turns physco-murder in less than a page)
Ending:2 (suicide endings are depressing and it's a rip of Romeo and Juliet)
ONE NOTE- I JUST THOUGHT THAT THIS FIC IS NOT RATED R.(UNLESS PG-13 IS BARNEY MATERIAL) a SUICIDE ENDING DOESN'T MAKE IT AN R RATED FIC. NOR DOES QUISTIS AND SQUALL IN BED DOESN'T EITHER.
| Rinoa H chapter 4 . 3/10/2002
OMG! That was soooooooo good! -
| dagger chapter 2 . 2/23/2002
omg that was wonderful! i usually dont like couplings other than what was in the game, but that was awesome! i love that zell! that was great!
| Pequenino chapter 2 . 11/10/2001
This fiction is kind of sad, but Squall and Quistis aren't like that, they're in the wrong character.
| Jane Heartilly chapter 1 . 9/18/2001
Sweet, real sweet...
| gold serpent chapter 2 . 6/12/2001
..if did cry..I would be crying...this is a good one...:)
| digigirl chapter 2 . 4/1/2001
Man! That was a sad fic! I don't want Rinoa to die!
| jess chapter 2 . 3/6/2001
um...it was cheesy, to be honest. squall is soo ooc, and rinoa and zell went from friends to i love you to zell having a ring in his pocket in under a page...you need to develop the plot more if u want to throw characters together
| wazzup chapter 1 . 2/22/2001
Squall's POV: Not Zelllllllllll!...
Mine: Not Zellllllllllll!...
Ahhhhhhhh Anyways, It Was A Good Story. I Just Don't Think That Zinoa Sounds So Good...Squall's Gonna Flip...HAHAHAHAHAHA _~
| Rinoa-Tenshi chapter 1 . 2/22/2001
Ok, i don't like to say mean things, but this was rushed, very very rushed, the feeling went FAR too quickly, one day she's despratly in love with Squall and vice versa, the next minute Squall is screwing Quisty and Rinoa and Zell have the hots for each other. And i think this was a great idea, but don't make is so quick, try is more gradully.
| no chapter 2 . 2/11/2001
what a crap ending!
| yeesh chapter 1 . 2/11/2001
i dont think squall would cheat on rinoa. the pig!