|Reviews for Darkest Before the Dawn|
| LOCISVU chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
Emma better be ready for the rescuing she has to do.
| KeptinSight chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Hope you haven't forgotten this.
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
I think you do an exceptional job at describing the different life of these two. I like the coffee shop/book store and I thought it was great that you emphasized her struggle in making espresso, which can be a challenge for those that don't pray to the caffeine god often enough to appreciate the hows and whys of if.
I have to say that it was both 'so' Emma as well as such a pathetic first impression for a job. I guess she read him pretty well, but not many people would be able to pull that off and get hired.
One thing seemed a bit early in the game to me, and that was the dream lover and also the detail of it. I love me some detail, but I just feel that it takes away a bit from the later tension/anticipation of when the two actually hook up. My opinion.
Nice nuance with Emma feeling so alone on her birthday, but Henry reminding her of her companionship, and then the inner-truth of it for her being that she yearns for a romantic partner.
Thanks for writing, and I am sure that you will rock the fantasy that is coming up.
Separate note: but what city are they in?
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
Mar-SO COOL JAJAJA RUMPEL,EMMA IS SMARTER THAN YOU AWESOME UPDATE SOON;-)
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
Yay for Emma! She tricked dear old Rumplestiltskin! Now I can't wait to see what happens next!
| LOCISVU chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
HA!Serves him !
| Scarlette-Rayne chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Now it's my turn! I know we talk all the time and you totally give me previews but you have got to keep this thing going girl! You are doing incredible with it! You know I'm here if you need to bounce stuff and you're doing so great with it! I wanna know where it's going next!
| sbrockz chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
| Avarenda chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Well, its kinda a weird mashup, but still well written.
| Avarenda chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
Well not that i mind the Wonderland crossover, but i hope they get to FTL soon.
| Avarenda chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Ohh really good start with an interesting premise. I cant wait to see Emma's first confrontation with Regina.
| KeptinSight chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Can't wait for the next update and for Emma to meet Regina.
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
Interesting Story! I wonder what happen to Henry? Looking forward to reading the rest!
| LOCISVU chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
They got sucked into Wonderland!That can't be good for both Emma & Henry.
| ray1 chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
This story is incredible. I see that there is a little bit of Tim Burton's Alice in Wonderland in this so far. I cannot wait to see what else you post.