Reviews for Dye
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I DONT REALLY LIKE ELESA'S NEW LOOK. IDK WHY. IT JUST SEEMS... DIFFERENT
Padfoot Arcanine chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Loved this. It's just a really cool concept for a fic and I think you did a great job with this. The imagery was lovely.

Keep up the great work!
ObsessedwithBirds chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Nice background story... keep it up.

Mich
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
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okay im done i rpomise thisi s tupid
CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Are you excited that Cheren's become a gym leader I'm excited that Cheren's become a gym leader.
movedto-theycallmeruthless chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Eeep, about a year and a bunch of incoherent conversations later and I'm still never know what to say when reviewing one of your stories.

I think that this was fantastic in that it packed a lot into two hundred-something words.

It easily expressed and introduced something of a new era - which is very much what BW2 is! - through something as simple as Elesa's hair swap, also bringing about a dark edge to the story that might apply to the new games as well.

I especially adored your word choice and imagery. Something as simple as Elesa's nails skimming her scalp makes the story seem very raw and picturesque. There were a couple of other words and phrases that had nice placement - referring to her as a "charge", "hyperactive demeanor", "sentimental theatrics", describing her hair as an "outlandish" color (which it usually is, if you don't have black hair - I speak from experience), "the dismal afternoon sky", she way she moved "languidly"...

And I liked that bit about her heels puncturing cobblestone! I didn't think it was one to take too literally, rather, one to induce a distinct mental image.

Overall nice work! Go Angie :o)
Mystia Katsuragi chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
It looks like you dislike Kamitsure's new hair color. o-o
Y-ko chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Heels don't "puncture" cobblestones.
Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
This was an interesting fic. I didn't know she died her hair before this...can't wait to see it. Nicely written :)
Golden-Owl chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Heh, I take it you saw the animated promo trailer too? I gotta admit seeing Elesa with black hair was rather unexpected. I do wonder what has happened to everyone in the 2 years since the first games.

From the looks of things, its likely that only the Leaders whose Cities aren't frozen over will be reprising their roles. Its likely that Burgh and Clay will remain at the their positions, but I can't honestly say for anyone else except Brycen, who went to become a movie star.

The story is short, sweet and engaging. It makes the reader curious and wanting to know more about what has happened, and Elesa is treating her dye job like a pretty big deal (then again it probably is). It has a sense of drama and mystery throughout it, which makes it a nice read even though its so short.
Grey Muji chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Hmm this is interesting...
Ability King KK chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
A very nice one-shot. It was surprising to see Elesa with black hair in the sequel, but I'm glad she returned. Now it makes me want to write out a drabble for my "Shining Cousins" collection on this subject.