|Reviews for Breaking Water|
| trisha63 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Hey Mel, so nice to read something from you again, as it has been a while. This was such a cute little love story and I simply loved it. Of all things, that Jacob would be a doctor and it would be him on duty to deliver her baby and see her lady bits. I'm quite sure is was Edward's worse nightmare, but Jacob was cool about it, so no harm no foul. Great writing, as always. Hope you have something new hiding up your sleeve as I have really missed reading your wonderful stories. Have a great weekend, and take care. Trisha :}
| OliviaJane chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Wow, it's been awhile since I read one of your stories. Awesome as always! Congrats on you win. :)
| bookluver93 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
very cute, sweet and funny. I really enjoyed it. Awesome job. :)
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Man, awkward turtle all right. At least he was nice and didn't make a big deal out of it. Hehe, I totally felt sorry for Bella for having to push out such a big baby though,poor girl. And the Jumbotron! I swear it should be banned from being used for proposals. Banned, I tell you. Lol
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Excellent use of Boggle! Very cute!
Congrats on the win!
| Gingerandgreen chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Beautifully written by a woman who's been there, done that. Well, perhaps not quite that - but you know what I mean. ;)
| akjamma chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
| dreampills chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
lol this is awesome! thanks
| Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
| teacher1209 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Oh this was too adorable!
| NPakus chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Loved this! What a fun, one-shot. Enjoyed your witty characters so much. Thanks for sharing.
| love bite chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Cute fic. I don't imagine Bella as quite that cranky, but I know from experience that the last few weeks of pregnancy are awful, so maybe.
I am 7 months pregnant now myself-not sure if this makes me excited or dreading the delivery!
Thanks for sharing a fun fic.
| BellaMadonna chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Loved this story! I miss you, bb. It seems like forever since we've talked. Good to see you're still writing.
| littlelizruth chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
oh wow! now this one was awesome! :)
| snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
LOL... to funny!