|Reviews for Breaking Water|
| bookluver93 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
very cute, sweet and funny. I really enjoyed it. Awesome job. :)
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Man, awkward turtle all right. At least he was nice and didn't make a big deal out of it. Hehe, I totally felt sorry for Bella for having to push out such a big baby though,poor girl. And the Jumbotron! I swear it should be banned from being used for proposals. Banned, I tell you. Lol
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Excellent use of Boggle! Very cute!
Congrats on the win!
| Gingerandgreen chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Beautifully written by a woman who's been there, done that. Well, perhaps not quite that - but you know what I mean. ;)
| akjamma chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
| dreampills chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
lol this is awesome! thanks
| Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
| teacher1209 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Oh this was too adorable!
| NPakus chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Loved this! What a fun, one-shot. Enjoyed your witty characters so much. Thanks for sharing.
| love bite chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Cute fic. I don't imagine Bella as quite that cranky, but I know from experience that the last few weeks of pregnancy are awful, so maybe.
I am 7 months pregnant now myself-not sure if this makes me excited or dreading the delivery!
Thanks for sharing a fun fic.
| BellaMadonna chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Loved this story! I miss you, bb. It seems like forever since we've talked. Good to see you're still writing.
| littlelizruth chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
oh wow! now this one was awesome! :)
| snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
LOL... to funny!
| fish525 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
This was such a cute story. I love the proposal and how some Edward's worst fears come true but he is able to be there for the birth.
Thank you for writing.
| chele the original chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Amazing I loved it. LOL
Fezzig props to the princess bride.
The zebra reminded me o f Madagascar. LOL
Poor Edward teased at every turn
His subconscious came up with all the other scenarios to help prepare him for the actual one. LOL