Reviews for Breaking Water
Babette12 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
When they went into the stadium and there were fireworks set up at one end I totally thought of Stadium of Fire! All the descriptions fit, the band, the fireworks, sitting in nosebleed.

Well, that proposal would have been great! You know those babies, they come at the most inopportune times. I loved that Edward knew she was in labor but she didn't.

I knew it had to be Jacob delivering the baby right away. Their reaction was too perfect, especially since you mentioned the dream earlier. I laughed.

Thanks for the fun story! xoxo!
motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
perfectly adorable, loved it, funny, just had lots of fun in it, and the Jacob thing, who would want him looking at your hooha with your boyfriend there. Too funny.
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Absolutely adorable!

My husband (boyfriend at the time) almost missed our daughter's birth. I was admitted to the hospital the night before my scheduled c-section b/c of dehydration. He went home to get some sleep and overslept-got there just in time.
honeyimhom chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I love it
tawelephant chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
So sweet and funny.
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