|Reviews for Mounting Debt|
| IsidoraAngst chapter 8 . 1/2
Damn that Jay. Oh, he'll get his. He'll get his.
| IsidoraAngst chapter 7 . 1/2
Sex on the beach is an awesome thing...except for the sand. I'm glad that Heath got one night of pure bliss and passion instead of being forced to do what he didn't want to do.
| takers dark lover chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
Oh I HATE Jay he's a BASTARD!
| EveIyapo chapter 8 . 12/12/2013
First of all, 2 chapters in as many days?! I was damn near giddy when I saw the update emails in my inbox.
The last chapter, the intimacy between Heath and Drew was lovely, so well written! It was great seeing Heath able to relax and enjoy himself fully with someone who actually seems to care for him. So I knew it was too good to last lol
When I read the first line of this chapter... oh how I wished I could post a reaction gif! My choice would have been Kevin Hart's infamous, "It's About To Go Down!" gif as that's exactly what came to mind. I was actually surprised that Jay didn't fly off the handle immediately like I figured he would. He's being very thoughtful and deliberate which makes him even scarier. I wonder if Heath will ever figure out that Jay's the one that bludgeoned his dog? Either way I'm ready for what comes next!
| LadyDragonsblood chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Okay... well that explains a lot... where Jay's "twisted" ideas of love came from... it was all he knew... so he just wants to teach Heath. That is really sad,... now I actually am kind of starting to feel bad for Jay. He simply doesn't know any better.
Well, I guess we know Boo wasn't hit by a car... so now, my new feelings of starting to feel sorry for Jay, just vanished when I read about the dog... I don't care... you don't beat a helpless animal jay...
Drew may be cheesy... but I fell for it!
Great chapter, if sad... Update soon pleaseee!
(sorry my reviews aren't much lately, but the arthritis in my hands makes it hard to type... I am just thankful all of my chapters got typed in before this flared up. I have one chap of the medieval story typed in so there is hope! LOL)
| ClarellyJelly chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
THAT SICK F*CKER! UGH! Jay's my favorite character but I want him to DIE!
Anyways your doing awesome on the story
| Sparkles Blue chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Holy shit... Jay is so damn messed up that it ain't even funny. He's really a sick individual. Although I do like the snippets of his Uncle which help to reveal how Jay got to that state. He's going to go to any length to make sure that he's the only one there for Heath. I really hope he doesn't hurt Drew.
| JadeRose1 chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
| takers dark lover chapter 7 . 12/9/2013
Yes Heath deserved one happy chapter. Interesting you made Drew uncut never seen that before.
| LadyDragonsblood chapter 7 . 12/6/2013
I wish I had a quarter of your talent! That was AH MAZE ING!
I can't help but wonder though... something tells me Jay saw the whole thing... and the little Fox is going to be in terrible trouble... because I am sure Jay won't take too kindly to what just happened. I worry for Drew as well.
Sighs, your writing was so descriptive, I could actually picture the two of them, I could actually smell the ocean breeze... it was wonderful.
Not much more I can add to that... I am glad Heath got one happy chapter, and Drew as well... I have always liked that thought of that paring!
Up date soon please!
| Sparkles Blue chapter 7 . 12/5/2013
Oh man, that wait for this update was so worth it. That kiss was sooo hot. Poor Heath is haunted by Jay but I'm glad that he tossed that out of his mind allowed Drew to take care of him.
| JadeRose1 chapter 7 . 12/5/2013
| Debwood-1999 chapter 7 . 12/5/2013
Nice! Like the light happy parts before the dark twisted parts. Very sweet.
| ClarellyJelly chapter 6 . 10/11/2013
I hope Jay kills Drew and has his way with Heath... I dunno I'm just really into the morbid type things and I LOVE Jay.
| IsidoraAngst chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
Another good chapter. I feel sorry for Heath and I hope he can get out of this situation.