Reviews for Some Kind of Tokoness
nacho5 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Ky0to chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
This story was stronger than the first one of yours I read, about Toph's coronation. The grammar was still shakey, but better. The fic also avoided rough plot turns without warning. One of the issues I did have at the beginning was that I didn't know who the narrator was to begin with, and I read the first paragraph or so rather confused.