Reviews for Just a Toko Story
Ky0to chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I liked the concept of this fic, and I think you captured the characters rather well. However, it was nearly impossible to read, due to the horrid grammar and lack of proper punctuation. Also, the story was difficult to follow at times when it made sudden leaps off course. This occurred in the moment before the coronation, with Toph and Zuko.