|Reviews for In My Veins|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8
Can I just say that was excellent? Your story felt just like part of the book, really. It was poetic but not exaggerated, hot but not obscene, and SO in charachter for both of them! This is very likely my favorite Foutris ever. Thank you for posting this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Oh my god this really turned me on.
| enj412 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
This is beautiful. You captured how much Tobias needs and wants Tris so well. I wish you had written more fics.
| Windchimed chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Nice and steamy!
| Robin C chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
Really great, perfect just how it would be.
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
| superfan24 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
I can't believe that A) this was your first fic and B) you haven't written anything else. Fabulous!
| Bamcn24 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
This was awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
| PrincessBlonde chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
| 123lovestory chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
That was really, really, really good
| Rosey chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Oh my god. This was outstanding. You've outdone yourself. Well done! I loved the fact that you could understand how Tobias felt. The desire. Detail was great, and the plot goes excellently with the book itself.
Keep going and you'll do great things.
| dkjfaldkfads chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
the charectors are nothing like the real tris and tobias, but still a good story, just not a Fourtris story.
| KT chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
SAME AS EVERY OTHER ONE
| KCakaAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Loved it :-) Really great for your first time. Love reading from his pov!