Reviews for In My Veins
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3
Fantastic!
Angelina Roongta chapter 1 . 2/10
nice
123lovestory chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
That was really, really, really good
Rosey chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Oh my god. This was outstanding. You've outdone yourself. Well done! I loved the fact that you could understand how Tobias felt. The desire. Detail was great, and the plot goes excellently with the book itself.
Keep going and you'll do great things.
Beautiful-Warriors chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
the charectors are nothing like the real tris and tobias, but still a good story, just not a Fourtris story.
KT chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
SAME AS EVERY OTHER ONE
KCakaAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Loved it :-) Really great for your first time. Love reading from his pov!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
3 the ending
LaidBackandLowKey23 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Well written and fun to read- great work!
jamie chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
this is amazing. one of the best stories i've read
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Thank you for not using the word "opening" in reference to Fagin's. Honestly that out a little... GREAT ALL IN SLL!
dominvs chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
oh this is so beautiful!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Whatever you do, don't stop writing! Ever! Maybe the first time is the hardest but you write like a pro. Really looking forward to a lot more from you!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I like the story, but your saying they pretty much have sex, on a table, in the lunch room for FACTIONLESS , that's cold and where people eat?
purebloodtribute chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
i want more! :"
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