Reviews for The Peach Creek Dance
Colezilla chapter 9 . 8/15/2015
I'm not surprised at all that it was Wendell who was f*cking things up for our heroes, I'm glad he got thrown out in front of everybody. The thing that I liked the most about this story was how Eddy, Kevin, and Jonny became good friends, I also liked how they each got the girl of their dreams at the end (save for Jonny), and it was real nice of all their friends helping them clean up the gym, but the thing that I enjoyed the most was the ending where Eddy, Jonny, and Kevin got together to enjoy some of that Papa Smurf. Yeah that sounded like they all had a kitchen
Colezilla chapter 8 . 8/15/2015
They spiked the punch, nice. I gotta say, I was a little worried at first, but seeing everybody make it at the last minute left me with a warm happy kind of feeling.
Colezilla chapter 7 . 8/15/2015
Holy sh*t that was close, but at least Eddy and Kevin made it back in time before anyone got suspicious.
Colezilla chapter 6 . 8/15/2015
Oh hell, how could they forget the food and drinks. I hope Eddy and Kevin get the essentials fast.

I know it's to late to make song requests but here's a few more classics from the 80s:
1.) Take on Me by a-Ha
2.) Never Gonna Give You Up by Rick Astley
3.) King of Wishful Thinking by Go West
4.) Karma Chameleon by Culture Club
5.) The Power of Love by Huey Lewis and the News
6.) Thriller by Michael Jackson
7.) Girls Just Wanna Have Fun by Cyndi Lauper
8.) Africa by Toto
9.) We Belong by Pat Benatar
10.) Wake Me Up Before You Go-Go by Wham!

That's all that comes to mind for now.
Colezilla chapter 5 . 8/15/2015
I don't like this Wendell guy (whoever he is), but Ms. Campbell is right, the guys don't have any proof that he trashed the gym.

Although I feel a little bad for Jimmy, I think Eddy was right; all Jimmy did was bust their [Eddy, Kevin, and Jonny's] chops and and antagonized theme while they were working. However, Eddy did kind of overreact with Jimmy.
Colezilla chapter 4 . 8/15/2015
God Damn, Ms. Campbell is relentless.
Colezilla chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
I like the fact that Jonny was serving as the voice of reason when Eddy and Kevin were fighting. You just don't see that very often. Also, it seems that Eddy really made dumb move by not skating with Ashley.

At first, I was surprised that Eddy knew how to skate on a skateboard, but then I remembered there was an old computer game where all three Eds were skating on a half-pipe.
Colezilla chapter 2 . 8/14/2015
Damn, looks like everyone had a blast. By the way, your OCs seem pretty cool.
Colezilla chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
So far so good, however I do wonder if a teacher can issue such a punishment but either way this is coming out good.
twitter mcjb23 chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Good story I can help you to try to make a comic book out of it and you should make it like a book like this is swirled one
Guest chapter 9 . 8/16/2012
what happened to wendell
Scary Spikender chapter 9 . 8/15/2012
Well, I have to say, this story was a pretty enjoyable read, and I liked the bantering between Eddy, Kevin, and Jonny.

I think I'll have to agree with the guest reviewer and say that you should do some sort of series.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/15/2012
Great story. You should do a series
alien babydoll chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
Oh my god, this is so funny!
I loved the part with Kevin driving around on circles while the janitor was like WTF?
Plus the part in the last chapter with the grocery shopping was so funny. "We forgot refreshments!"
"Are we really that stupid?"
Scary Spikender chapter 8 . 8/13/2012
Nice job as always. This chapter had a lot of funny moments, such as Kevin driving around the parking lot in circles, as well as Eddy desperately pouring the flasks of vodka into every punch bowl.

And I wouldn't call your readers loving, they were calling you a "nincompoop" and a "dum dum" all over you not updating. What a bunch of dorks... but I digress. Can't wait for the next chapter, my friend.
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