Reviews for The Thing in the Mirror
Inmate XIV chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Wow...Vanitas is kinda schizophrenic in this one. But this was really cool. I really liked it, and it was good for your first time. Hope you write more!
WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Wow, for your first story, this is really, really good! No grammatical errors, no spelling errors, Vanitas actually is in character if this takes place before BBS, and a very interesting and original idea, too. If you hadn't said that this was your first story, I really would've thought that you've been writing on here for years now.

I hardly ever favorite someone's first story, but this is just amazing! Great job! :)
Confection of Bliss chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Gosh Van...that's really sad! D: But I luved it so berri much! :D Man, poor Vani tho :(
OmniaVanitas chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
well written. just...too sad