Reviews for Reading Broken Lines
RosePetal7 chapter 5 . 7/2/2012
Yup after what Greg said that was definitely some revenge lol. Ouchies though it kind of stung me too. More!
remoob1513 chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
all i can say. wow
MG12CSI16 chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
Ouch, poor Sara. :/
Although I do like it when Greg gets mean, it's something different and you write it so well!
Jannet525 chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
Ouch! Very angry... :)
charlibubble chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
oooooooooooo Greg... I think I am in love with you when you are so mean!
oh but also, poor Sara. ok, so maybe she deserved it a little but OUCH! what a way to exact revenge! :)
RosePetal7 chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
Ahh nooo! I hate it when they fight. They definitely said things they're going to regret...
Jannet525 chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
Sad...I hope in happy ending... :)
charlibubble chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
First, I feel the need to use your story as a vent for voicing my distaste at FF changing the review thing again .
Secondly, I do love a good fight... this one was funny and yet I can tell it will have serious consequences. Poor Greg has been used and abused and Sara doesn't seem to even have a tiny bit of conscience about it! this will come back to bite her - I can feel it in me bones ;o) xx
RosePetal7 chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
charlibubble chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
ooooooooo this is exciting! love the line 'They didn't need to fall in love and break each other's hearts- they could blow each other's minds in bed and leave it at that.' :) x
RosePetal7 chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Aww just flawless. The beginning I was reading so quickly because my eyes would carry to the next sentence wanting more lol. Literally I thought ahead to them marrying and having kids :) Just such a beautiful description of Sara to Greg. Lovely!
MG12CSI16 chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
A great update. Definitely looking forward to finding out where this is gonna go! :)
MG12CSI16 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Sounds sad. :/

But I'll be waiting for more!
RosePetal7 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Very beautiful so far. Has me wondering where you'll go from here. I'll loom out for it.