|Reviews for The Astonishing Justice Games|
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2014
Hey do a beta search then put in your requirements, willing to do cross overs, good at finding grammar errors, consistent, then contact 4 or 5 of them and go with whose available.
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2014
please continue! I need to know what happens next!
| Biancachu chapter 7 . 6/18/2014
I like te story as it is, but please update sooner.
| Maddie Seth chapter 7 . 3/20/2014
Please update soon! This is such a fantastic story, and I really, literally cannot wait to read more! :)
| Maddie Seth chapter 7 . 12/23/2013
Soooo... Hi there. I know you said you weren't giving up on the story but I'm pretty sure it's been over a year since you updated... I mean I'm sure you've been busy. Just sayin. But anyway, the point is-this is pretty much one of the most AMAZINGNESS stories I've read recently. I read the Hunger Games books forever ago, and I randomly saw the Catching Fire movie last night, and ohmygod that movie was so amazing. I had really low expectations, too. So after the movie finished I had all these ideas, like, how would certain people react in such situations? And then I found this story, and I LOVE how neither sides are AU. SO. What I am trying to say is, I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope you continue. I'm putting this in Unfinished for now. I look forward to updates! :)
..of course, if you really aren't interested in writing this anymore, I get it. Thanks for the awesomeness. _
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/19/2013
Loving the story but this chapter confused me... I could just be my tired mind, iv been studying for a math test that's tomorrow! Update soon!
| K. G. S chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
I don't have an account, so I can't beta, but I can bug you until you do this story again. This is really well written, and has a good plot. I'm excited about this. You need to get off your lazy behind and post chapter 8. Like, now. Please. Come on, what are some good ideas? The team gathering all the other tributes and making sure they don't kill each other while they figure a way out? The team protecting as many as they can while pretending to go along with the Games? Please post a new chapter. At this point, since it's been about 6 months, some people may have stopped checking for updates and following your story. The longer you wait, the more people will do this.
K. G. S.
| Ray chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
The story is going extremely well. Give up on it and I know where you live...
| Dudetzzz4 chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
OH. MY. GOODNESS. THIS. IS ASDFJKLING AMAZING!
Seriously, all the other YJ/HG stories are all basically the same, but yours made me one heck of a believer. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| runobody2 chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
Aww... No Robin trolling? Oh well, maybe later. His sunshine and rainbows speech was funny though...
Adventure time? Really Wally? I guess we know his secret dreams now.
So many continuity references I could cry. Timothy? Teen Titans?
| runobody2 chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
I knew he was in the rafters!
| runobody2 chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Why doesn't M'gann change her appearance to normal? She's a shapeshifter, she doesn't have to be green if she doesn't want to...
| runobody2 chapter 3 . 8/6/2013
"Have you tried exploring the rest of the train yet? This thing is huge, and I'm pretty sure I'd willingly give my own life to have a 24-hour buffet like that in my bedroom."
| runobody2 chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
So there are evil plots going around, eh?
One note: nobody in the YJ universe actually calls the team Young Justice. That's just the name of the show. They are usually referred to as "The Team" by the league and themselves, and "junior justice league" by condescending villains and etc.
Of course Robin would laugh...
| runobody2 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I would like to commend your excellent characterization. I started reading, then got up to do something else, and when I got I saw one line of PO6's interview and knew it was Artie. And awesome Alice-in-Wonderland reference, by the way. I especially enjoyed the sprinkling of troll!robin, I love Robin meets stranger ficklest just because of how much they underestimate him...