|Reviews for Your Love|
| hellokitty236 chapter 14 . 3/31/2014
well damn can you contuine
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/25/2014
I LOVE that you had him immediately apologize for being an ass. That, more than anything should make her see who he is.
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/25/2014
AGain-too fast here!
Dom leaves Letty at the doctor's office after finding out she's pregnant. She gets upset and leaves him to move in to another apartment. It's only been a day and he's pissed at the though of her raising a child without him?! are you serious? she has another 7-8 months before she gives birth for theym to get back together. And him thinking of her with another guy is also jumping the gun. Its still the same night as the doctors appointment for crying out loud. She does he think she's gone? china? the way he talks, he's never going to see her again and she's going to raise his child alone. didn't she say she'd still work at the shop? he'll see her either way...
Also, how long did it take Letty to figure out she was ready to work for a child? She had weeks to get used to the idea, and yet she expects Dom to be ready after a 5 minute conversation that was basically "hey, I'm pregnant witj your baby"?! She needs to give him a little time to get used to the idea, just like she did...
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2014
so, if I do the match right, letty is 18 now...
I'm not sure she should interpret Dom being scared when she suddenly announces a pregnancy as evidence he doesn't want to be in a relationship. More evidence that they were two stupid kids who couldn't be bothered to use appropriate birth control...
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2014
um. how old is letty supposed to be here? She's sort of acting like a 14 year old, but then she's going to go off and live on her own?
Her response to being pregnant (and then to not being pregnant) was too fast. You went by it so fast, we couldn't get our heads around it. How did it make Letty feel? Not just was she worried about DOm's reaction, but how did SHE feel about a life growing inside her? and isn't she in high school? How is she going to support a baby? even with a job.
then suddently she's not pregnant (TRUE: 1/3 of all pregnancies end in miscarriage) and her interpretation of Dom's silence is: he's cheating on me and I have to leave? While a miscarriage is sad, i'm not sure that a teenage pregnancy would have been a great thing either. Even if Dom loved her and they were going to be together forever, NOW isn't the time to have a baby! when they are just getting together. Have her pull herself together please! and use some f)&*% birth control like responsible people!
where did the cheating part come in.?
| MsShashaD chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
I just found this story, and i honestly want to know why people always write fanfics where Letty comes from a broken home where her parents are drug abusers and alcoholics who beat the shit out of her, it's tiring and unauthentic. when I saw fast1 and mia's conversation with brian i didnt see that, and letty was strong and did at no point whatsoever portray that she was abused.
| guest chapter 14 . 11/30/2013
continue with this story please
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/7/2013
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| guest chapter 14 . 11/6/2013
| Enchanted15 chapter 14 . 10/27/2013
Please keep going begging please I am in love with this story.
| LeeLee chapter 14 . 9/15/2013
You should keep the story going but u letty lied to dom about not being pregnant... So on and so on
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/3/2013
I hate the fact that you make letty put up with Doms bullshit and Cheating.
| tanya2byour21 chapter 14 . 7/2/2013
I want more. I want to know if Dom and Letty work things and just what the hell is going on between him and that Tran Skank and how Letty will deal with her please please please. Post more.
| bree19 chapter 14 . 7/1/2013
Next chapter! Or start a sequel! As long as u keep writing this story I'm happy :) I really want to know what happens after this!
| Princess of Darkness17 chapter 14 . 7/1/2013
I would end it here and start the sequel. Great chapter