Reviews for Chance
diana teo chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Aiyoh! Why do these two have to be so darned complicated? Sometimes I feel like I just want to smack the words out of them,yelling,'Say it! Say it,NOW!'
I'm Feeling Puckish chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Wonderful story! :)
Abbi4Raie chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
That was cute. Its a good thing Tony got the second chance.
Alidiabin chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
It's weird how this kinda fits with the SF, was it published before or after?

I understand your frustration.

I like it. And I love how Ziva didn't need words.
mon-petit-pois chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Great story! Glad it wasn't an episode tag. I for one am sick of them:/

Anyway, good job!
starryjules chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Maawwwww love it! So, so love it! Following Tony's stream of thought and watching Ziva swing from caring concerns to pure irritation when dealing with him...very true to their characters!

Thanks for sharing this with us! :)
easylion chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Great job! Love it!
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
A lovely little piece of T/Z flangst.

My favorite line(s): She never does tell him. But he thinks he might've gotten her message loud and clear anyway, for once.
MegpieLovesTiva chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Aww... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this! Hopefully this is what Tony actually thinks in the next season! :)
TapesAndRecords chapter 1 . 5/17/2012

Wow, you certainly know how to do it, don't you? I was so excited to read this, really! (Castle, what Castle?)

I love the first paragraph, relating to movies and everything, and the fact that there's no diaglogue- it's really not needed there.

And when he remembers what he'd been thinking? And she automatically goes 'Where does it hurt'? Heart. Hurting from adorableness. Then, gosh, he gets her to say what she had been feeling like! *applauds Tony* Then, when she admits she kissed his hand, it's so cute! And what does he do? Say "Nothing" and observe the pain in her eyes.

It's unfair, I'm telling you.

Et, finalement, it all goes awesome. Well, angsty at first, but then awesome. XD And yeah, I love the whole paragraph, and I especially love the conclusion- as I'll say later- but man, that first line. It's so simple! He just whispers it, and it sounds, in my head, so... perfect. Does that make sense, or not?

Anyways, I adored it when he 'kissed her back', and I also thought her angry little 'I am not just another notch on your bedpost' was great. And she says yes! Well, nods yes, but oh well.

Favourite line: "She never does tell him. But he thinks he might've gotten her message loud and clear anyway, for once."



I love them.

Kiera. :D
ncisloverinnc chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Lovely job, as always!
DaniSJ chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I enjoyed this!
Leah339 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Aaawwww this is so beautiful *_* I LOVE it. I'm still an emotional mess after the season finale, and this story is not helping me. Not at all XD
LittleMissBrit chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Your one-shots are amazing!

This is no exception xxx
Miss-L14 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Really loved this one, especially in the context of the S9 finale (seriously beyond amazing - what a cliff-hanger! I sure hope the teams ok, I don't know how I'll survive til September :S); I do hope Tony/Ziva get a moment like this in S10. Keep up the good work :)
22 | Page 1 2 Next »