Reviews for Power of love
Fantasy6850 chapter 4 . 6/18/2012
Interesting concept! actually really enjoyed!
queen of miami chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
more when you can!
C.H.W.13 chapter 3 . 6/10/2012
Short chapter, but at least its a chapter none the less:)

Very interesting of how Ryan loves spending time with his kids but then forgets to take off his ring at work. Clumsy but a common mistake for some people. I think its about time the rest of the team know:)

How will the team react to this discovery or do they know already? He could have left different clues for the team without realising it?


C.H.W.13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
This is an interesting story. Has good potential to become something great. Keep up, can't wait to see the teams reaction:)

Is there going to be a twist in the story?

Update soon if ya can:)
ajay1960 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012

lilgenious chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This is a good start but you really need to work on your capitalisation. Within your dialogue you always have to capitalise the first letter at the beginning and you need to also capitalise the possessive "I".

Also you need to really work on your description. Some parts of this fic seemed extremely rushed and the characters were a bit out of character.

Also you keep going back and forth between tenses and that really annoys a reader, almost as much as lack of description.