Hot sexy times! I like.

PLEASE CONTINUE! BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!

Very smutty! Incredible work! It was a sexy, nice, and quick read that makes me wonder where the hell other people like you are. If there was one thing that I had to be sort of picky about, it would be that you accidentally had a few run-on sentences. I kind of got bored of those and skipped over them. However, there weren't many and didn't take away from the story too much. This remains to be a great fanfiction. You're a great lemon writer, man!

Love this. I've always liked having the two of them paired together. Great work.

Wow! Hot!

I liked this. Exactly what I'd expect from the two of them.

Hi ! I'm a french. (Yes my english it's very bad) I asking a one more thing, you meet a men or woemen french/english, who trying to translate you're fiction, because it's really great and the french "lecteur" (i'm sorry), they like you're story ... i think. So please ;) (and i'm so sorry for my english, i know i most listening my teacher ;) ) A plus

AWSOME!

This was pretty good. I have seen plenty of short sex fics turn bad but this was good. Nice.

Nice!

I wouldn't normally like those characters together, but that was really good. X

Hot. Very good, but may I offer some cc? "sucking like a starving baby" does not give me a sexy image.

Excellent ... just enough tease ... certainly enough to want me to read more of your stories.

Loved it! :D

Thanks for sharing! :)