|Reviews for Devil and angel|
| Alice chapter 12 . 1/4
You should consider getting a beta for this story to clean up the grammar and diction errors, then upload it on AO3 (Archive of Our Own) with the sex scenes intact. They're not stingy on that sort of thing over there and you'll probably get more page hits anyway (Bon/Rin seems to be the most popular AoEx pairing on that site).
That said, I am enjoying your story. Keep writing.
| FreakyMe99 chapter 3 . 10/18/2014
Can I get the X scene from this chapter, if possible...? Thank you...! _
| Angel of FallenRoses chapter 3 . 10/3/2014
send me the sex scene plz!
this is such a great story omg!
| Inesu-chan chapter 22 . 8/5/2014
Send me all the yaou please!
| Pandas01 chapter 22 . 6/17/2014
Ahh I love this story! You are a great writer! :3
| Hotaru chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Cried twice throughout this single chap. *applauds with tears in eyes* Well done! (I'm such a crybaby)
| WulfeNight chapter 3 . 6/10/2014
please send me the scene you left out of the story called devil and angel in chapter 3
| Vivianne95 chapter 15 . 6/4/2014
I like I like! However, think we could have a fic on Mephisto x Gabriel? I think it could have potential, but i'm not so good at writing...
| Shadow of the Angel chapter 22 . 6/1/2014
Wait...so what happened to Bon? Is he in Gehenna with Rin? If so YAYYYYYY they're together
AMAAZING STORY BTW.
| kikyo22 chapter 6 . 5/31/2014
Okay. So I'm not even halfway through the story and there's a couple of things. 1. I love it! I never thought it would turn out to be a turn pager, so to speak (there's no pages). 2. Few grammatical and spelling errors but it still flows well. 3. There's some parts that read kind of rushed but it's livable. 4. Could I get the uncut version if you still have it? I think I would understand some of the parts better if those scenes were. Thank you!
| Paul chapter 22 . 5/26/2014
Your story is one of the best ive read. And ive read ALOT! You need to do another story based off this one!
| AnonymousIDK chapter 6 . 5/17/2014
Can I get the full version I love this story
| Npeaknoda chapter 22 . 5/11/2014
Oh my gosh, I was so sure this would never be finished, it made my day to see that it had been updated!
Thanks for the great story, it's been a pleasure to read. Looking forward to what you do next! :D
Could you please PM me the unedited version?
| xiddav chapter 22 . 5/11/2014
thank you for ending it exactly how I thought it should end... I saw Bon doing that from the moment you showed Shiro in gehenna. still perfect
| Panda Master X chapter 22 . 5/10/2014
Awww. I wanted to REALLY smack Bon for going down to hell, but man! That was sweet. Lol. XD Rin found a reason to go on, and everyone was satisfied. I think... Lol. Anyways, you're welcome! I can't help but stickk to a story I really enjoy! :D