This is a wonderful, and dare I say fascinating, story that I am planning on rereading many more times. The characters were very accurately written into the plot, which was hilarious, exciting, and very well-paced to say the least.
Perhaps needless to say that I’d definitely recommend to any reader who enjoys binge reading a creative and well written story.

ok, maybe my mail won't be delated if I write it like this: 2557347667 at qq dot com

Hi! I have read half of your story so far, I am gonna comment it once again when I get to the end. I saw your note at the end though and I must say I completely don't understand what you mean. This story written badly? You must rewrite it to make it better? C'mon girl, it is a masterpiece! I could write a whole essay here to express how much I am enjoying it! And I am a mature and a very picky reader, I assure you. I always think reading fan fiction is getting through 90% of crap to discover the 10% of pearls. Your story is marevellous! It could be a novel if not the copy rights. First of all, I love your characterisation of Loki and Tony. They are just exactly the same like in the movies. I admire you, you did a wonderful job. I think Loki is a very complex character and it is really easy to spoil him. In your story he is fascinating and intimidating, just as he ought to be. I am really glad he doesn't chill out to quickly. Tony is so Tony too and all those references he always throws at any occasion, it is also so authentic. It would be very hard for me to do that because sometimes in the movies I don't even get it what he refers to, I am clueless like the Asgardians, haha, but maybe it is because I am not American and not very much into pop culture. His personality is very real too.

Secondly, you're a master of a comedy. Some scenes are so funny! I just keep on smiling like a creep to the screen, my husband laughs at me and says something must be wrong with me. You write it so well, so gracefully, I really don't know how to express how much I am enjoying it.

I also really like it that characters' behaviour is very natural and logical. I could totally imagine them saying the things they say or doing what they do. There is one exception, though. I think Tony is reckless and curious enough to engage in a game with Loki, I don't doubt that. But I don't think he would fetch him a weapon with witch he might, for example, try to conquer the planet again. It is just, I don't know... so mindless. I don't think he would do something like that.

I love it how the romance slowly develops, it is so subtle and you describe all those little things, glances, touches, etc. so beautifully. It is both natural and original. And breathtaking! And I really appreciate it they are so mature. I read so many fics where they are completely besotted with each other and they have absolutely no idea what is happening with them, they stay so blind to their own feelings and it lasts for few hundreds pages as if they were two teenage girls, for god's sake. But in your story it doesn't happen and I am so glad for that! They have a perfect sense of what is happening with them, as any adult person would have. They may deny it and be pissed off, but they know. I really like that little detail.

The overall story is very good as well. It is such a good idea with the game. Other characters are also well written, I would just say that Natasha turns out a bit flat and mean. In general, it is a very entertaining read, it has everything what it has to! Authentic characters, beautifully written romance (ok, not much happened till the 22 chapter, but you build the tension beautifully), super funny moments, dynamic dialogues and actual plot. A very good plot. I can only take off my hat and bow to you. Great job!
And I have a very fervent favour to ask of you. You said you are gonna continue the story and post it on AO3 from now on. I know that platform of course, I have used to read fan fiction for years there. But right now I am in China and I ll be stuck here for another year. There is Internet censorship here and I don't have access to most foreign websites, now inculding A03 as well. So, please, could you post the continuation of your story here as well? And if no, could you send it to me via e-mail? I would be more than happy. I can't wait for a year to read the end! This is my e-mail:

Best regards and wish you a lot of inspiration.
Never stop writing! It would be a sin.
S.

I love this fanfic so much. Please, please, please, do finish it one day!

Eight years after my first reading and I'm still loving it!

Hello! I've just reread this story over a few days and I am once again gutted to reach the end. This story is a masterpiece, and you left it at such a pivotal point! I wish that you will finish it some day.
Kind regards,
Kiki

This chapter was so intense and it reminded me of the chapter in Purple Hyacinth when Lauren made a deal him and at the end of the chapter, he said in her ear, “And so it begins”

Omg! I've read and reread this story many times over the years and always hoped you'd update. It's in my top three favorite Thor fanfics ever written. When I randomly decided to look it up again (just a minute ago) I almost threw up because I'm so excited to read it. I think I'll pull an allnighter to read the new version.

Come on, so? What happens next?

I'm loving this already!
The frame and shape of the story is sturdy, not wavering like some other books I read.
I'm loving the plot, first chapter or not, it's amazing! This is honestly a blessing.

Many Thanks,
Storylines.

Im glad to see you back and i cant wait to check out the new stuff! I just want to ask but is this version going to be staying up or are you planning to take it down on here when you put the new one on archive? (I might have misunderstood if you were planning to rewrite it all or not and wanted to check if that was the case and if so if this version is staying up) im going to go check our your archive now!

Even though End game is out, the world needs more Loki. I'll wait. Following.

It’s so good I’d rather you just keep posting here

I'll follow you of course

Awesome..i can't wait! Thnx for the good news